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Much Ado About Antelope

The thickets were traitors, Front and back they cut me down Till I lost the sight of my buttery; Gasping like blacksmith’s belows I asked: What flesh did antelope even have?

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Date: 11/16/2014 10:03:00 PM
Sometimes in life, we need to stop and ask ourselves, is the reward worth the risk?.... Congrats on your win with this unique and thought-provoking write. Well done, Kayode!
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Date: 11/13/2014 3:33:00 PM
Congratulations on your win Kayod5
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Date: 11/13/2014 9:20:00 AM
Very fine write, congrats on the win
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Date: 11/12/2014 4:06:00 PM
many congrats on your win :-) Hugs Jan x
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Date: 11/6/2014 11:34:00 PM
a very interesting one. I like what Sara said to you. Like Brer. Rabbit story!
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Date: 11/6/2014 10:35:00 AM
Cute one..I got a chuckle..That antelope must have been like Bro. Rabbit..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
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