Ms K 2

Today as i drove i saw your face
that's a good thing! nothing to waste;
thrilled as i was, my emotions linger
my thoughts on thee, sharp as a razor.

Oh! miss K, your eyes shine bright
complements your smile at beauty's height;
even the days grow dim as night
loving you surely, with all my might.

My thoughts on thee, that can't be wrong
i can't help it when you break out in song;
tears my heart, to you i belong
but walk alone, my steps forlorn.

People say we can't unite
as pearls that shine brighter than white;
they peel me away, push for a fight
then cast me down, deep into the night.

Sadly i miss thee throughout the day
longing for friendship that's wasted away;
say you'll be mine, O' dearest K
i'll wait for you, beside the bay.

Till the next time we meet again
my hopes on thee, ne'er refrain;
love's lost a moment, i can't maintain
like a journey on a long lost train.

World's apart, never to meet
singled out, your beauty bleeds;
let's start off with two little kids
i'll help you throughout all of your needs.

Alas! my dear we'll never cross
our paths unreal, our paths aloft;
so here i stay till they gather moss
alone and empty beside God's cross.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 8/9/2017 6:03:00 PM
Oh my, such a sad ending, John. Very well done here. A poignant piece of poetry.
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John Leong
Date: 8/12/2017 1:38:00 PM
oh well...one can only dream i guess. thanks for dropping by; and yes! i shall check out your poem too; God bless!
Date: 8/9/2017 6:03:00 PM
Hope you got to see part two of my poem "what set me off" I put the link to it at the poem.
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John Leong
Date: 8/12/2017 1:38:00 PM
yes! going there now; cheers!
Date: 8/8/2017 12:58:00 PM
sad, sad, sad! sometimes love makes a way when odds are against it; but i shall not weary, for as they say, love overcomes all! cheers!
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