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Ms Contrary's Soup Garden

Round and round writing prose,... she will stop, who knows where helping him, helping her, helping all of us grow .. Debbie's poetry hoe has been sharpened by time She tills the Soup garden, with verses and rhyme.. Planting a rose, where the verse needed flow Her crops flourish ripe, with a talented verse and takes out a moment, to help you, of course ... I wouldn't label her poems, as sweet as a pea... She doesn't shy away from tidbits of some controversy If you've read D. G's poems You'll see they don't fall flat.... She is gifted with excellence....and that is that!! Her poems aren't too mushy....they are filled with the meat Of wit, and thought....not meager sprouts Some need to be read again and again To quite understand what she's all about Like peas in a row, they will weather the rain There are Imps in her garden, who like to munch They turn over the leaves, page by page I have a hunch...she's an Imp herself... She is never content...to sit on a shelf With those contests quite clever...to help us write better, We will grow our own....from the seeds she has sown... As we reap from the harvest....it is easy to see Adding peas to the pot....adds some spice to the plot Being contrary......our Ms. D.G. stirs the Soup family !! ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Oh my....are you ever brave to let us mess with your poetry!!!! Courages?? YES !! For Ms. Guzzi's contest ..........from her poem called "Ms. Contrary's Garden"

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Date: 7/30/2010 12:41:00 PM
wow, you picked a great one to emulate and came up with a winner. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 7/30/2010 5:23:00 AM
Congratulations Carrie on your win in Deborah Guzzi's contest "Critcise Me". Love, Carol
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Date: 7/29/2010 10:21:00 PM
Congratulations, Carrie on your success in Deborah's contest, Agape, Moses
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Date: 7/29/2010 6:14:00 PM
Excellent Poem, Carrie. I know that I have grown as a poet over the last year especially and Ms. D. G. played part in that. Her contests are teaching events where thoughts are stirred and perfection is sought. Congratulations on your placement. Lovingly, Dane Ann
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Date: 7/25/2010 6:04:00 AM
Witty piece, I hope Deborah the headmistress votes this high, it's koolio >> James
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Date: 7/24/2010 7:04:00 AM
cute one, funny!
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Date: 7/23/2010 11:49:00 PM
geeez, I have no idea what is going on. I gotta check out this contest!! This is really cool. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 7/23/2010 7:23:00 PM
LOVE IT!!!!!! jimbo
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