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Ms Brenda Brawling's Pen

Ms. Brenda Brawling borrowed nothing, but begged life to bestow her something. Blistered blue when life barely listened, she began buying bargain fiction. By and by, she believed she’d become a book ink fly. Her heart bade she give her own fantasies a book try. Brenda bathed blank sheets in beaut romance billowing with bawdy circumstance. Brenda bloomed when her pen beget one man’s behavior; the book’s brawny, bold boatman became her heart’s savior. Brenda’s book was bought in big, boxed bundles, so she boasted bling, but felt befuddled. Daytime, bedtime, both brought baleful feel born from thoughts baring boatman’s appeal. Brenda balked, but she well failed to block boatman’s stalk who wormed her sanity thru fiction’s crosswalk. Obeying her pen, she beheld him in blissed fantasy blocks. Now, Brenda’s berserk pen bends her daily at bleak o’clock. 10-9-16

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Date: 7/8/2019 5:24:00 PM
Wonderful alliteration, CayCay. Congratulations on your first place win. All the best~ Warren
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Date: 11/30/2016 9:04:00 AM
Brenda searching for 50 shades of gray but in her own way. Very innovative poem that brought a grin to my face.
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Date: 10/11/2016 4:13:00 PM
I enjoyed your 'Brenda' story, CayCay. Yes, we both went 'sad' on the challenge...but in my mind, any author obsessed with her/his own story character is a little 'off'!! Anyway, congrats on your nice placement! Hugs, Sandra
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Julia Ward
Date: 10/12/2016 2:52:00 AM
It's not real-life, Sandra.
Date: 10/11/2016 8:37:00 AM
very cute poem CayCay :) congrats on your placement :)-luloo
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Date: 10/11/2016 7:18:00 AM
Congrats, CayCay!
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Date: 10/11/2016 12:57:00 AM
Back to congratulate you on your win Hugs
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Date: 10/10/2016 4:21:00 PM
Wonderful with lots of Bs good luck in the contest :-). Hugs eve
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Date: 10/10/2016 9:15:00 AM
This is a really fun read, CayCay Fantastic alliteration. She's bound to love this one.
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Caycay Jennings
Date: 10/10/2016 3:30:00 PM
Hey, Daniel - you are looking good today! I hope you are feeling good in all ways. Love your comments and appreciate them ... CayCay
Date: 10/10/2016 4:35:00 AM
Well done with this, it's out of my league, Great write xxxxxx
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Caycay Jennings
Date: 10/10/2016 3:29:00 PM
Hey, Wendy - thank you for your sweet comments, but I disagree - no write is out of your potential league! Poetry hugs ... CayCay
Date: 10/10/2016 4:07:00 AM
your polished pen can pass as painted , puzzling paper on a perfect day!..picturesque, cay..lol!.. what a pleasant piece!
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Caycay Jennings
Date: 10/10/2016 3:28:00 PM
th - th - th - thanks! Love your clever comments! I hope you are feeling as upbeat as you sound, Nette, cause you sound like sunshine ... Love ... CayCay
Date: 10/9/2016 9:43:00 PM
That is AWESOME CayCay, the amount of b's is overwhelming and yet you wrote a beautiful poem!
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Caycay Jennings
Date: 10/9/2016 10:29:00 PM
She wanted b's so I gave them to her! So glad to know you enjoyed it, Darren. Many thanks and poetry hugs ... CayCay

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