Ms 13

The sky was getting dark, with an overcast of gray
MS 13 tempted my madness, on this cold winter day
An ensuing chaos on my life had slowly crept in
A night of fear had now come and was about to begin

Cryptic and cold was the message displayed
My life would be changed by the end of this day
From a call that had come in the early morning light
I searched all day and prepared for a fight

I could not seek any help, no police or she’d die
Please come and save me, I heard in her cry
My friend had been taken and held against her will
She was tortured and beaten, her blood they did spill

I was armed with a pistol but not properly trained
I kicked in the front door and took careful aim
Zip tied to a bed with a bloody hood on her head
I found my dear friend before she was dead


September 3, 2020
Courage Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Chantelle Anne Cooke
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Allison Avatar
September 12, 2020 at 11:56 AM
so sad to read this scary story is actually true, thanks for sharing - you are a hero to me in many ways Mark you have the courage to stand up and do something my friend!:-) hugs jan xx
Ermine Avatar
September 10, 2020 at 3:17 PM
Mark, I'm absolutely filled with horror. I can't fathom this scary event for your friend. - Your immense bravery one million percent fits the poem subject criteria. A debt of good will is owed to you.
Ermine Avatar
September 10, 2020 at 10:31 PM
Yes, He gives you strength. Your wearing and activation of strength is extraordinary.
Koplin Avatar
September 10, 2020 at 5:14 PM
Thank you for reading Sigrid. I’m owed nothing, Jesus is owed a debt of goodwill not me.
Goldsmith Avatar
September 10, 2020 at 1:28 PM
Congratulation on your win. What a powerful write. Enjoy your win and day....
Koplin Avatar
September 10, 2020 at 2:00 PM
Thank you Paula! You as well
Carmack Avatar
September 5, 2020 at 7:41 AM
God must of helped you for MS13 is absolute evil. Not many around me, but I still prayed for my kids as they were getting older.
Carmack Avatar
September 5, 2020 at 9:43 AM
When I think of them - Proverbs 27:20; “Hell and destruction are never full; so the eyes of man are never satisfied" immediately comes to mind.
Koplin Avatar
September 5, 2020 at 8:31 AM
God and my 50 cal.
Koplin Avatar
September 5, 2020 at 8:31 AM
They are animals
Rodrigues Avatar
September 3, 2020 at 1:39 PM
Wow! Scary tales are ever truer. God sees and vengeance is His.
Rodrigues Avatar
September 3, 2020 at 3:04 PM
Scary that there are a lot of them in Minneapolis! My son for a time was living by the college and basilica. Glad he moved before all this happened!
Koplin Avatar
September 3, 2020 at 2:08 PM
There are a lot of these gang members in Minneapolis. Thankfully I’ve I only had a couple of run ins with them and got very lucky.
Cunningham Avatar
September 3, 2020 at 1:35 PM
Powerful verse Mark, is this non fiction?, If it is I salute you. Tom
Koplin Avatar
September 3, 2020 at 2:06 PM
True story, thanks Tom
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