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Ms 13

The sky was getting dark, with an overcast of gray MS 13 tempted my madness, on this cold winter day An ensuing chaos on my life had slowly crept in A night of fear had now come and was about to begin Cryptic and cold was the message displayed My life would be changed by the end of this day From a call that had come in the early morning light I searched all day and prepared for a fight I could not seek any help, no police or she’d die Please come and save me, I heard in her cry My friend had been taken and held against her will She was tortured and beaten, her blood they did spill I was armed with a pistol but not properly trained I kicked in the front door and took careful aim Zip tied to a bed with a bloody hood on her head I found my dear friend before she was dead September 3, 2020 Courage Poetry Contest Sponsor: Chantelle Anne Cooke

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Date: 9/12/2020 11:56:00 AM
so sad to read this scary story is actually true, thanks for sharing - you are a hero to me in many ways Mark you have the courage to stand up and do something my friend!:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 9/10/2020 3:17:00 PM
Mark, I'm absolutely filled with horror. I can't fathom this scary event for your friend. - Your immense bravery one million percent fits the poem subject criteria. A debt of good will is owed to you.
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Sigrid Ermine
Date: 9/10/2020 10:31:00 PM
Yes, He gives you strength. Your wearing and activation of strength is extraordinary.
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Mark Koplin
Date: 9/10/2020 5:14:00 PM
Thank you for reading Sigrid. I’m owed nothing, Jesus is owed a debt of goodwill not me.
Date: 9/10/2020 1:28:00 PM
Congratulation on your win. What a powerful write. Enjoy your win and day....
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Mark Koplin
Date: 9/10/2020 2:00:00 PM
Thank you Paula! You as well
Date: 9/5/2020 7:41:00 AM
God must of helped you for MS13 is absolute evil. Not many around me, but I still prayed for my kids as they were getting older.
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Rob Carmack
Date: 9/5/2020 9:43:00 AM
When I think of them - Proverbs 27:20; “Hell and destruction are never full; so the eyes of man are never satisfied" immediately comes to mind.
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Mark Koplin
Date: 9/5/2020 8:31:00 AM
God and my 50 cal.
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Mark Koplin
Date: 9/5/2020 8:31:00 AM
They are animals
Date: 9/3/2020 1:39:00 PM
Wow! Scary tales are ever truer. God sees and vengeance is His.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/3/2020 3:04:00 PM
Scary that there are a lot of them in Minneapolis! My son for a time was living by the college and basilica. Glad he moved before all this happened!
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Mark Koplin
Date: 9/3/2020 2:08:00 PM
There are a lot of these gang members in Minneapolis. Thankfully I’ve I only had a couple of run ins with them and got very lucky.
Date: 9/3/2020 1:35:00 PM
Powerful verse Mark, is this non fiction?, If it is I salute you. Tom
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Mark Koplin
Date: 9/3/2020 2:06:00 PM
True story, thanks Tom

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