Dakarai Cobb Poet Acrostic

Mrnatethegreat

Must I continue to hear your crying,
 Regarding the issue of scars and sheep.
 Nobody else sees that you are trying
 A way to avoid being put to sleep.
 Teach me how this "slamming thing" should be done;
 Eventually I will get it right.
 Teach me, by engaging me one-on-one,
 Having the guts to just SHUT-UP and fight.
 Entertain the crowd, while using your "skill,"
 Giving them a good reason to believe.
 React to me with that instinct that kills,
 Every time that my rhymes are received.
 All that I want is for you to step up
 To the plate, and stop whining like a pup.

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Earle Brown August 26, 2010 at 8:05 PM continue to do what you do

Carol Sunshine Brown August 24, 2010 at 9:05 AM Enjoyed reading your poetry today Doc. I am really starting to enjoy these slams more and more. Love, Carol

Poet Destroyer A August 23, 2010 at 8:35 AM Cute Doc, i like the ending, aweee,, i like to think of that cute puppy face that inspire a womens heart. The skills are good, but I think Nate waits for something with no crown attached to it. By the way did you read the new WARLOCK slam to me..LOL.. Doc, some guys are just not good to rejection. And just to think I use to read his work. LOL, how he did not like the news about me and Nathan..Later my friend,..p.d.