Mr. Truly Amazing

Sixteen years old and in a world of her own
Confined to life lived in a wheelchair
Ever since birth, doctors don’t know what went wrong
But, it was like no one was at home in there

One summer vacation with the other kids in tow
The family visited a Kentucky horse stable
They left her alone in a sunny grass meadow
While off riding with the children who were able

While sitting alone in a catatonic state
Staring out somewhere in space
A gelding that was grazing, Mr. Truly Amazing
Came up and licked her on the face

The family returned to a shocking surprise
Seeing the wheelchair left unoccupied
They looked all around, then couldn’t believe their eyes
When they saw her standing with a horse by her side

She was petting his nose, feeding him an apple
And seemed to be whispering something
They were frozen in their tracks not believing the fact
That their Jenny was no longer a nothing

The mother walked up, in a delicate manner
Not wanting to interrupt this miracle’s course
When Jenny turned to her and in a shallow voice
Whispered, “Look, Mommy, I have a horse”
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Davidson Avatar
October 22, 2020 at 4:13 AM
Wow....I have no words...its just beautiful
Freeman Avatar
June 28, 2011 at 1:20 PM
Joe, Congratulations on your beautiful third place poem, a pleasure to read. Agape, Moses
Phookan Avatar
June 25, 2011 at 1:47 PM
It touched my heart to read this.. Congrats Joe on your wonderful win with this amazing write. ..gautami
Dailey Avatar
June 23, 2011 at 6:13 PM
Excellent poem and congrats on a well deserved win. MIke
Taylor Avatar
June 23, 2011 at 4:17 PM
Congrats on 3rd Place, Joe. Excellent piece. Nice going. Ralph
Johnson Avatar
June 23, 2011 at 4:05 PM
This is a wonderful story and I know that autistic children are especially helped by having a chance to communicate with and ride these wonderful animals. Love, Joyce
Guzzi Avatar
June 23, 2011 at 2:13 PM
I have heard of riding sessions for wheelchair folks such a great idea animals help us get through trauma with unconditional love. Congrad's on your fine verse winning! Light & Love
Mehta Avatar
June 23, 2011 at 1:31 PM
My congratulations on the win in the contest of carol, joe
Sweetheart Avatar
June 23, 2011 at 12:34 PM
Congrats Joe on your excellent win in the horse contest .. enjoy...
Brown Avatar
June 23, 2011 at 11:44 AM
Congratulations and thank you for supporting my contest Joe. Love, Carol
Dufresne Avatar
August 22, 2010 at 6:29 AM
hey Joe..fantastic and there are many such stories that I have seen with my own eyes..My wife is a trainer and has helped teach many challenged children about horses.One such autistic child never spoke a word untill she trained him to ride a horse and the connection was made..... His parents said he couldn't stop talking that same night when he got home.....thanks for bringing this to people's attention that these are not just fables.. again into my favs
Brown Avatar
August 2, 2010 at 10:20 AM
Congratulations to you on your win Joe in Tirzah Conway's contest "A Horse Is A Horse Of Course". Love, Carol
Ryerson Avatar
August 1, 2010 at 3:59 PM
Wow, Joe...this is a real gut-wrencher with a joyous ending... Congratulations on your 1st place win!... I like the fact you seem to be able to write serious AND funny stuff with equal ease...Also, I never got the chance to express my gratitude to you for honoring my poem in your 'Top Ten' contest so, I am doing that now...Thank you very much Joe! - Tim
Green Avatar
July 30, 2010 at 11:03 PM
AWESOME! Definite 1st place winner- congrats!
Mehta Avatar
July 30, 2010 at 3:45 PM
Congrats, Joe, on your first place win.
Guzzi Avatar
July 30, 2010 at 1:15 PM
I hope so this was not something you and yours had to go through, if it was thank goodness your child came back to you! Congrad's and Light & Love ( and YOU know I still want my periods LOL)
Sweetheart Avatar
July 30, 2010 at 11:49 AM
Big congrats Joe on your first place win in the Horses contest... magnificent write my friend.. a truly Mr. Truly ride for us readers... enjoy another top notch win ...with luv..
Richards Avatar
July 30, 2010 at 10:55 AM
A tender story, as only you can tell. What a lovely look at this contest!! Beautiful!! Congratulations on your first place, Joe!!!
Brumley Avatar
July 30, 2010 at 10:53 AM
Beautiful story Joe, way to go. Gongrats on your win!
Roberts Avatar
July 30, 2010 at 10:32 AM
see, I told you it would do amazing in the contest, it made me cry, congrats on the well deserved first
Taylor Avatar
July 30, 2010 at 10:13 AM
Outstanding write, Joe. Congrats on 1st Place. Nice going. What a great story. All the best. Ralph
Dillard Avatar
July 30, 2010 at 10:01 AM
It's wonderful when miracles happen. I enjoyed your story. RAY
Conway Avatar
July 30, 2010 at 9:48 AM
They say horses have healing powers-I'm sure you agree! This is a fantastic write, congrat's to you on your well deserved first place in my contest!~Tirzah~
Brown Avatar
July 28, 2010 at 6:22 AM
What a great array of poetry we have been presented to read today. I am happy yours is one of those poems I have read today. I hope your day brings you much inspiration so you may continue presenting your poetry to us to read Joe. The best to you in the contest. Love, Carol
Kendrick Avatar
July 27, 2010 at 1:23 PM
I can just see the scene of the miraculous healing...I didn't look to see if this is fictional or real life...Good job..Enjoyed...Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my write about "Fried Green Tomatoes"..I enjoye the Saran Wrap scene also plus when she hits the car and gets a laugh and when she goes to the nursing home and tells Jessica Tandy wants to shot the genitals of sex perverts...I just love the movie and would love to read the book that it was based upon..Did they bar-be-que him?SK
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