Mr Sun and Mrs Moon

above the sky high above
the sun shines brightly 
as the moon 
she's past asleep

radiant heat 
all over me
a feeling so intense
warm as the love I have for you

and when it is dark 
and storms begin to gather
God's tears falls from the above
to cleanse the world below

as the moon awoke 
Mr sun falls into slumber
bringing life and serenity
to the weary world below
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Nunez Avatar
May 8, 2015 at 12:29 PM
An intriguing take on the subjects. Currently working on a collaborative write on the same with a different angle. Welcome back, kabayan. Hope to see more of your works in the coming days. :) Kim
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
May 5, 2014 at 3:02 AM
vivid imagery.. :) beautifully written indeed.. :) God bless you today and always.. :) lots of Pinoys here.. :), olive here.. God bless. :)
Hilario Avatar
May 6, 2014 at 6:50 PM
thanks, God bless you too. It's good to know you're safe outside the phil - hope you can get back here soon and enjoy our country.
Meyer Avatar
January 3, 2014 at 9:02 PM
Hello Kabayan Michael! Thank you for visiting my page and leaving your kind thoughts in my box. Will check on you and the other great ones in soup. Hope time is friendly enough. But, thanks for taking time. the sun and moon are definitely universally intriguing as evidenced in your poem.
Meyer Avatar
January 3, 2014 at 9:05 PM
simply well expressed. great job!
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