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"Often we're afraid to show Love that's in our heart,
To let the other person know what's in our truest part,
All because we're afraid of how it will be perceived
And how they'll treat the Love once they have received."
~ Quote by Artsieladie 

Mr. Moon and Secrets by Artsieladie

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"Mr. Moon And Secrets" When I shared my secret with dear Mr. Moon, He didn't keep my secret and across the lagoon, He whispered to the breezes, although I asked him not. Was it plumb disregard or simply he forgot? Either way, my secret's out, with Mr. Moon to thank. Perhaps, I'll call on the Comets, to use their tails to spank! For now all the Universe is aware and fully knowing, And since news travels fast, the stars are all a glowing. The Milky Way has overflowed in the Galaxy of stars And all this commotion has awoken Mr. Mars. Miss Venus, still sleeping, though stirring in her dreams, Mr. Mars will arouse her with Mr. Moon's beams. Old Mr. Sun, the director in the know, Is adding sunbursts to enhance the show. So let this be a lesson, listen to my call, Telling Mr. Moon secrets isn't wise at all. Art/Poem by Artsieladie/Sharon Donnelly  ©2014-10-21 00:23:00 (EDT) All rights reserved.

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Date: 6/15/2018 4:12:00 AM
If you cant trust the moon then who can you trust, love how you done this Artsie, You gave it an astronomical feel, love all spacey things. Tom
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Artsieladie Sharon Donnelly
Date: 6/20/2018 10:19:00 PM
Yeah, lol, Tom, we should be able to trust the moon. O, the imagination, where there are no limitations, resulting in some of the silliest creations. Thank you for your added thoughts. Have a pleasant day. :) ~ Artsie

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