Emma Buckeridge Poet Tanka

Mr Moon

The silver moon shines
Shimmering over the sea
Lighting up shadows
Stirring right inside of me
Watching waves drift on the shore

The night sky dances
With the gentle silver face
Holding hands with stars
This scene, my eyes have embraced
Watching life drift in the night

For contest : moonlight dream
By Emma Buckeridge
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Beata Agustin June 12, 2025 at 9:24 PM Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.

Skat A January 25, 2016 at 7:38 PM EMMA, Excellent poem, Awesome flow. Luv ** SKAT **

Carol Sunshine Brown December 6, 2011 at 11:14 AM Congratulations on your win in Tracie's "Moonlight Dreams" contest Emma. Love, Carol

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl December 5, 2011 at 2:39 AM Congratulations on your win x

Bob Quigley December 4, 2011 at 8:58 AM Well penned Emma. Congratulations on your win.

Annabelle Jane November 29, 2011 at 2:24 PM Beautiful... you and i clearly share a love of the night sky! x

Anne-Lise Andresen November 29, 2011 at 2:14 PM I like "Mr. Moon" We have the same moon i Norway too. Love Anne-Lise

Doris Culverhouse November 29, 2011 at 1:57 PM enjoyed reading....

Sarah Seraphin November 29, 2011 at 1:53 PM * "And I See Your Beauty * As An Angel Standing Upon That Gentle Shore * Stars Smiling At You * Knowing, One Day You Shall Be Theirs to Keep * Joy * My Luv, Always * Sarah." *