Mr Moon

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^{Love Shines In The Spotlight Of The Moon...}

Chorus:
Please Mr Moon....Mr Moon.....
Paint a romantic glow
While I hold her close
Don't be blue

Oh Mr Moon....Mr Moon.....
I don't need a lucky star
To win her heart....
I've got you

I brought her here tonight
I knew you'd be shining bright
And if she was having doubts
I knew that you......
Could help me out

Repeat Chorus:

Mr Moon, you can change the tides
I know you can make her mine
Send down a magic beam
And she will fall.....
In love with me

 Repeat Chorus & tag





Colab with:
Kenny Alphin & Rory Feek

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Vladislav Raven

Date: 7/5/2018 6:28:00 AM

Hi Chuck, a wonderful lyrical collaboration. How love can shine within the glow of the moon. How it can shine within a lyric. Keep singing your songs Chuck. Have a wonderful Thursday. Your friend....Mike.

Vijay Pandit

Date: 6/12/2018 6:07:00 AM

Delightful rendering..filled with emotions and longing..well done, Chuck.

Chuck Melugin
Date: 6/13/2018 7:55:00 AM

Many thanks Vijay! I pulled it out of yesterday! I so appreciate your golden words!

Heidi Sands

Date: 6/11/2018 7:54:00 PM

Sweet one Chuck ! :)

Chuck Melugin
Date: 6/13/2018 7:51:00 AM

Thank you so much Heidi! One of my co-writers on the song has a daughter named Heidi! What a beautiful name!