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Mr Mccheesy Feet

Mr McCheesy has large feet wears size 40 shoes, no simple feat plip! plop! thud! phud! was all you could hear miles before he would appear Many would hide to hold themselves safe not wanting his cheesy feet near their face many scorned, poked fun, gave retreat all ran and hide, but never to seek Mr McCheesy felt alone in despair for he truly felt no one did care mock him, tease him, laugh did they each time he passed anytime of the day One darkened morning a fierce storm came calling torrential rain lashed heavily down ground gurgling, mud pouring all ran, found cover, all prayed When all was calm was plain to see the devastation they did not forsee disbelief, shock an all forlorn wheat and corn was all gone sodden wet mud laid bare openly mangled limbs from drowned trees Roads now broken, buried in ground how was they going to travel around? stuck, cut off from outside life they knew to be in heavy strife In distance a familiar sound echoed flew splish splosh splush vibrated through Mr McCheesy the man with large feet pounding down the ground skillfully neat Creating a road solid and sound for everyone to convey around feet echoing sounds they once did fear now welcomed with loud roaring cheers Lone warrior working his large feet In rhythms of phuds and splats Mr McCheesy on hearing their claps spurred on reclaim land to reap Added cheers erupted, boomed loud and clear "you've made the horror disappear Mr McCheesy you've saved the day hip! hip! hooray! hooray!" From that day forward none laughed at him again ashamed and guilty of their bullying and pain for he was their hero he saved the day a statue was erected in his grand name We are all unique with qualities of difference some dont see, only show of their ignorance god gave to us for reasons unknown were all different it is often shown but the devil he teases and tempts with his sin turns us into imbeciles and cruelty sets in If ever your teased to having cheesy feet remember the tale wrote above cheesy feet who saved that day gave so much and forever his love 26.08.20

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Date: 8/24/2021 2:39:00 AM
Love the message within your verse, Emilia, nicely penned. Hugs, john
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Date: 8/24/2021 4:14:00 AM
Thank you John, not read this one again myself since I wrote it but I do remember it kept growing and growing and this is the edited version lol. Hugs, Emilia : )
Date: 9/4/2020 9:40:00 AM
what a wonderful positive message you give Emilia! a fab poem indeed:-) hugs Jan xx
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Emilia James
Date: 9/5/2020 2:55:00 AM
Thank you Jan, enjoyed writing this one. Emilia xx : )
Date: 8/29/2020 7:43:00 AM
Sweet poem Emilia.
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Emilia James
Date: 9/1/2020 2:46:00 AM
Thank you James : )
Date: 8/27/2020 3:09:00 PM
Read your poems e-mailed to me. Don't we just learn everyday. Poetry enhances the mind and widens your imagination. You are creative! Let your imagination soar and create more poems.
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Date: 9/1/2020 2:45:00 AM
Thank you Marilene for your kind comments. It does feel my mind awakens when I write, not sure if that is a good thing or not lol. Emilia : )
Date: 8/27/2020 2:17:00 PM
I would be honoured for you to share my poem with your students if it helps in some small way. Thank you so much. Kindest Regards Emilia xx PS have you sent soup mail.
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Date: 8/26/2020 4:55:00 PM
Emilia, thank you for a darling story I would like to share with my elementary students if you would give me the okay. I teach anti-bullying and character education.
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