Autumn Bell Poet Free verse

Mr Lie

You said you loved me
So why do I feel hated

You said you cared for me
So why do I feel abused

You said you'd never leave me
So why am I alone

You said you understand me
So why aren't I understood

You said I can do anything
So why has everything failed

You said you would never let me go
So why am I falling

You said to never give up
But I'm long past that

The last thing you ever said was I love you
and I won't stop till I die

I thought you said you loved me
That's what I get for trusting Mr. Lie

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Skat A July 28, 2016 at 4:17 AM Happens to the best of good write. Skat

Owen Van Der Schyf May 23, 2016 at 5:23 AM Nice poem. I enjoyed it

Jill Spagnola April 28, 2016 at 11:03 AM Autumn, your verse sounds sooo familiar to me...Unfortunately I totally relate:( Awesome job of heartfelt expression!!When it's right you'll know. Experience gives us the wisdom to see deceit...best of love, peace...jill :)

Stephen Pennell April 28, 2016 at 9:47 AM He is in the the dog house, feel the emotions good write stephen