Carol Sunshine Brown Poet Rhyme

Mr Bartender

Oh dear friend of mine
I need to tell you about me and my wine
It always goes down so smooth
All of my cares it does soothe

Then when I go home 
To my frig I do roam
Inside another bottle of wine does set
So needless to say another glass I get

Then my eyes starch to blurling
Ants my worchs starch to slurching
Jist wunch I tellch waach agret friegs zha ares
Angs jist menbers thizisg way i donst goes ta bars

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Poet Destroyer A April 27, 2014 at 2:29 AM Carol... CONGRATULATIONS:) on having your poem featured on the soups HOME PAGE. Goodnight poet friend <3 =LINDA

Funom Makama June 11, 2012 at 4:23 AM ohh so smooth and cool...

John Castro November 30, 2011 at 11:26 AM lol nice :P

Sashi Prabhu November 2, 2011 at 12:28 PM WOW, Ryming and the picture in minds comes out crystal clear.... would be gr8 a song to hear,,,,,,,........

Margaret Foster November 1, 2011 at 11:43 PM Thanks for the smiles, nothing worse than starchy eyes :-) ...Margaret

M.I.A . November 1, 2011 at 10:23 PM LoL! the last verse was a genius! good luck on the contest carol. a real winner for me

Prince Ekpemandu November 1, 2011 at 2:51 PM nice one Carol.....thumbs you

Rosalyn Lampkin November 1, 2011 at 1:47 PM Oh, my dear friend....I can tell you were at the bar when you wrote this one...TOOOOOO many drinks. The last verse is speechless. Thanks for making me LAUGH

Carolyn Devonshire November 1, 2011 at 12:56 PM Ha-ha! This is a hoot, Carol. Love it! Especially the last verse. Surely a winner! Love, Carolyn

Doris Culverhouse November 1, 2011 at 6:50 AM funny!! love it!!

George Aul October 31, 2011 at 4:04 PM I really like your poem........George

Faleshia Murphy October 31, 2011 at 2:05 PM hi carol another wonderful write enjoyed this one made me laugh i'll be checking back in on friday still tryinfg to catch up on your delightful poetry love you faleshia

M. Hussain Effendi October 30, 2011 at 6:59 AM This is very creative of you, madame. lol... Best of luck for the contest

Robert Walker October 30, 2011 at 6:14 AM i really enjoyed this one i can feel your vibe in your writing have a blessed day

Kash Poet October 30, 2011 at 5:01 AM Haha..very nice ending here Carol.Enjoyed.Best wishes.

Laura Breidenthal October 29, 2011 at 11:04 PM Hahaha! LOVE the ending. Amazing and very creative! Always, Laura

Fabiyas M V October 29, 2011 at 9:19 PM It is so nicely penned for the contest,Carol

Judy Ball October 29, 2011 at 3:12 PM This is too cute and really clever. Loved it. It made me smile. God Bless, JB

Linda-Marie Sweetheart October 29, 2011 at 12:41 PM super cute piece and cleverly crafted for the contest..luv the phonetic words of vocab Carol..much success in the contest my friend..luv..

John Bones October 29, 2011 at 4:51 AM Dear carol, Good to hear from u again thank u for ur encouraging words from john n lizzie

Andrea Dietrich October 28, 2011 at 10:54 PM VERY imaginative,Carol. Gosh, I wonder if I could pull off an entry in this one. Probably I'm too late! I really like this. I doubt I will ever do a contest again. too many headaches. I really appreciate how you do yours. Luv, Andrea

Harry Horsman October 28, 2011 at 4:26 PM Well Carol this indeed is a very very good poem, love this sense of humour. enjoyed. Harry

Sara Kendrick October 28, 2011 at 4:05 PM Interesting work..Reads like one has gotten two sheets to the wind..Good luck in the contest..Thanks for the kind review of my work..Sara

Jack Horne October 28, 2011 at 3:22 PM LOL, good one : )

Russell Sivey October 28, 2011 at 1:41 PM I really like the slurring take at the bottom of the poem...you have done wonderfully with it! What would it look like if she was totally plastered? Awesome work!!

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