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Mr and Mrs Dumpty, Egg-Cidental Death

He lay there, shattered,

                    the shell of his former self,

          scrambled beyond hope ...



Not really her fault ...

                    all she wanted was a quiche,

          but she'd pushed too hard.





~ 6th Place ~  in the "Pithy Pants" Poetry Contest, Maureen McGreavy, Judge & Sponsor.
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Allison Avatar
February 19, 2019 at 11:49 AM
very witty Greg:-) hugs jan xx
Barden Avatar
February 20, 2019 at 6:56 PM
Thank you very much, Jan! :-) <3
Gauthier Avatar
February 11, 2019 at 9:26 PM
Very clever, Gregory. Congrats on your win.
Barden Avatar
February 11, 2019 at 9:35 PM
Thank you very much, Dear Line - blessings! :-) <3
Ashley Avatar
February 1, 2019 at 10:32 PM
I enjoyed your poem’s charming wit, Gregory. Congratulations on your wonderful win. Warmest wishes always, my friend.. ~Susan
Barden Avatar
February 11, 2019 at 9:35 PM
Many thanks to you, Susan, I'm so pleased you enjoyed my poem! Blessings, Dear Poet! :-) <3
Dietrich Avatar
February 1, 2019 at 6:11 PM
Ha! good one, Greg. Congratulations.
Barden Avatar
February 11, 2019 at 9:34 PM
Thank you very much, Buddy! :-) <3
Kitchin Avatar
February 1, 2019 at 4:19 PM
Ha ha, hilarious, congratulations on your win Greg! :)
Barden Avatar
February 11, 2019 at 9:34 PM
Many kind thanks, Tania, I so appreciate it! :-) <3
Cozart Avatar
February 1, 2019 at 9:36 AM
Very funny, Greg! Congrats.
Barden Avatar
February 11, 2019 at 9:32 PM
Thanks so much, Dale! :-)
Pigeon Tart Avatar
February 1, 2019 at 9:22 AM
Delirious pithy fun, Yum! Congratulations on your Pithy Pants Win Greg! xomo <3
Barden Avatar
February 11, 2019 at 9:31 PM
Thank you Mo!
Lawless Avatar
January 31, 2019 at 11:28 AM
...the quiche of death
Pigeon Tart Avatar
February 1, 2019 at 9:21 AM
LOL! ;D
Barden Avatar
January 31, 2019 at 3:31 PM
Indeed, John ... he's cooked, (and that's no yolk). :-(
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