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He lay there, shattered,

                    the shell of his former self,

          scrambled beyond hope ...



Not really her fault ...

                    all she wanted was a quiche,

          but she'd pushed too hard.





~ 6th Place ~  in the "Pithy Pants" Poetry Contest, Maureen McGreavy, Judge & Sponsor.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 2/19/2019 11:49:00 AM
very witty Greg:-) hugs jan xx
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Gregory R Barden
Date: 2/20/2019 6:56:00 PM
Thank you very much, Jan! :-) <3
Date: 2/11/2019 9:26:00 PM
Very clever, Gregory. Congrats on your win.
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Gregory R Barden
Date: 2/11/2019 9:35:00 PM
Thank you very much, Dear Line - blessings! :-) <3
Date: 2/1/2019 10:32:00 PM
I enjoyed your poem’s charming wit, Gregory. Congratulations on your wonderful win. Warmest wishes always, my friend.. ~Susan
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Gregory R Barden
Date: 2/11/2019 9:35:00 PM
Many thanks to you, Susan, I'm so pleased you enjoyed my poem! Blessings, Dear Poet! :-) <3
Date: 2/1/2019 6:11:00 PM
Ha! good one, Greg. Congratulations.
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Gregory R Barden
Date: 2/11/2019 9:34:00 PM
Thank you very much, Buddy! :-) <3
Date: 2/1/2019 4:19:00 PM
Ha ha, hilarious, congratulations on your win Greg! :)
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Gregory R Barden
Date: 2/11/2019 9:34:00 PM
Many kind thanks, Tania, I so appreciate it! :-) <3
Date: 2/1/2019 10:51:00 AM
Ooooh noooo... what a tragic end to a beautiful partnership! Bless em! Nicely done Greg!
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Gregory R Barden
Date: 2/11/2019 9:33:00 PM
Yes, and she had finally gotten him to come out of his shell ... very sad. Love isn't all it's cracked up to be, it seems. :-(
Date: 2/1/2019 9:36:00 AM
Very funny, Greg! Congrats.
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Gregory R Barden
Date: 2/11/2019 9:32:00 PM
Thanks so much, Dale! :-)
Date: 2/1/2019 9:22:00 AM
Delirious pithy fun, Yum! Congratulations on your Pithy Pants Win Greg! xomo <3
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Gregory R Barden
Date: 2/11/2019 9:31:00 PM
Thank you Mo!
Date: 1/31/2019 11:28:00 AM
...the quiche of death
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Maureen McGreavy
Date: 2/1/2019 9:21:00 AM
LOL! ;D
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Gregory R Barden
Date: 1/31/2019 3:31:00 PM
Indeed, John ... he's cooked, (and that's no yolk). :-(