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At any rate ... or any time, I so prefer a metered rhyme ... If from a fool or from a sage, It bounces briskly off the page. Quick to grasp a mind or heart, And tickle fancies, a la carte ... Dancing fast, and hard to catch, Nimbly footed sounds to match. Off the tongue to tumble, swift, Rolling phrases dart and drift ... Furtive words, so fun and fleet, Filled with cleverness, replete. Locution molded, start-to-goal, To paint an image in your soul ... Terms entwining wishes, bright, To dim the day or burn a night. Letters, turned to eyes that cry, Lungs to breathe, wings to fly ... Lines with tempo, sweet or sour, Blooming runes as phrases, flower. Words otherwise, just in-a-row, But set to rhyme, compel us so ... Thus taking phrases, commonplace, And giving them a charm and grace. Turning parlance into song, Helping verbiage move along ... Telling tales with tempo, quick, No matter what the bailiwick. Speeding up the things we say, To send them sweetly on their way, Words in rhythm just won't wait ... That's rhyme to me ... at any rate. ~ 5th Place ~ in the "At Any Rate It Will Be Fast Moving" Poetry Contest, Julia Ward, Sponsor.

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Date: 2/15/2018 8:09:00 PM
:) congratulations on your win, Greg !!
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 2/16/2018 2:38:00 AM
Many sweet thanks to you, Eve, you are always so kind! Blessings! :-) <3
Date: 2/14/2018 2:20:00 PM
Back with congrats and HAPPY VD BABY! ;P <3
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 2/16/2018 2:37:00 AM
Thank you so much, My Mo - Happy Valentine's Day! <3
Date: 2/14/2018 9:23:00 AM
Awesome!
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 2/16/2018 2:37:00 AM
Thank you so very much, Anna! :-)
Date: 2/14/2018 8:22:00 AM
WOW! I really love this lively, rollicking poem--excellent. CONGRATS on your win! Janice
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 2/16/2018 2:37:00 AM
That's so kind of you, Janice, and I so appreciate the wonderful comment! Blessings, Friend! :-) <3
Date: 2/14/2018 6:30:00 AM
Wonderful poem, Gregory. Enjoyable read. Congrats on your win.
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 2/16/2018 2:36:00 AM
Thank you very much, Line, I'm glad you liked it! Blessings! <3
Date: 2/7/2018 9:46:00 AM
Love the feel to this Greg, seems somehow melodic, I guess it's the cadence that allows a liquid roll of the tongue, enjoyed immensely. (No more predictions for contests) but it's a winner to me!
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 2/10/2018 7:53:00 PM
That's very kind of you, Buddy, and no worries about the predictions ... I know how you feel about my work, and that's an award to me, (as I feel about yurs). Blessings, my friend! :-)
Date: 2/4/2018 6:41:00 AM
Lovely as always, Greg, and quick moving at that! Love the use of bailiwick!
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 2/4/2018 1:33:00 PM
That's very sweet of you, Kim, thanks so much ... I haven't used bailiwick in quite a while, but it fit so perfectly I couldn't resist! Blessings, My Dear Poet Friend! :-) <3
Date: 2/4/2018 12:37:00 AM
That's an interesting spin. Well done, Gregory. GL
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 2/4/2018 3:55:00 AM
Thanks very much, Line, I hope it didn't make you dizzy! ;-) Blessings, Friend!
Date: 2/3/2018 9:42:00 PM
This was so much fun to read Greg! Fave for me at any rate ;P mo hugs
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 2/4/2018 3:55:00 AM
Thank you so much, Dear Mo ... blessings, Dear Poet! <3
Date: 2/3/2018 9:00:00 PM
Lungs to breathe in wings to fly ... Lovely lines to live by ... Great poetry no doubt, Greg ... Best wishes for the contest ...
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 2/4/2018 3:56:00 AM
That's very kind of you, Probir ... thanks so much, my friend! :-)

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