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Moving Train

And I remembered that train ride as we passed Tsavo and the elephants raised their ears in warning or greeting As I watched at the window and dared them approach the moving monster of a train That would not stop to let us stare in wonder! Oh that futile attempt to plead with the driver To bring to a halt his unstoppable charge O that futile attempt to halt a moving train!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 9/18/2013 6:39:00 PM
nice poem and very meaningful. Lots of imagery in each line. Good job.
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Gerald Kithinji
Date: 9/19/2013 4:35:00 AM
Robin, Ndaba, Ravi, James- thank you for your positive input. And thank you for sharing with us your gems of poems.
Date: 8/19/2013 11:48:00 AM
Enjoyed reading your piece.
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Date: 8/19/2013 3:10:00 AM
Excellent. Well penned. Tfs
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Date: 8/18/2013 7:07:00 AM
Gerald...I see a nice metaphor for society.....well done! jimbo
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