Moving Places

Am always amazed by my work, my walk
Reckoning where I have been
Where I have grown, where I am, how I came
God can only tell. tickles me like the sound of a wrecking ball
Like ripen! I’ve risen, it’s gripping
Talking in this soothing tone, at dawn
Was just spectacular
Amazed, no hazy, pushing
To see the morning light
After all this twilight
Now an embracing and reaping from this embellishment, my work
It changed my life, it changed my game
My feelings, gotten healing, am griming
Marvels every time I read this story
Getting hear was just a hobby
I wake up early morning en Chuckle 
saying I break mountains and
Move places.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017
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Agustin Avatar
April 23, 2025 at 12:05 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
De Beaulieu Avatar
July 2, 2017 at 7:43 AM
I like this poem . I sense a message here. Well done.
Okello Avatar
July 3, 2017 at 12:57 AM
Thank you Darlene. I am amazed. God bless you!!
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