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Moving On Onyx Sea

Another sad love poem Fit for the poem cemetery Oh how I feel alone Instead of feeling peace The rain falls as I bawl A deep dead onyx sea Matters not at all if you crawl You really hurt me Flowers gifts won’t fix it And even if you do change Trust in lust what you did Nothing will be the same I can forgive go on with My life for it is my own But I don’t desire your kiss My heart has to move on

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Gershon Wolf

Date: 1/25/2025 7:22:00 PM

Onyx a good choice of stone --- as you 'nix' this fellow. ~ gw

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 1/25/2025 7:56:00 AM

The rain falls as I bawl A deep dead onyx sea…losing something of the heart is always hard. I remember bawling..

Karen Jones
Date: 1/25/2025 1:02:00 PM

Yes those heartbreaks stay in your memory!

Ink Empress

Date: 1/25/2025 1:41:00 AM

Sigh i feel your pain and heartache through this very well woven poem! I love how youv described the sea of emotions and how youv used the stone onyx here is so profound and creative dear karen. Yes sometimes we forgive but feel like nothing changes and we will end up getting hurt again. Such a sincere and soul stirring poem this is! Pleasure reading this. Sending you light today and always

Karen Jones
Date: 1/25/2025 1:48:00 AM

Thanks Inky!