Karen Jones Poet Rhyme

Moving On Onyx Sea

Another sad love poem
Fit for the poem cemetery
Oh how I feel alone
Instead of feeling peace

The rain falls as I bawl
A deep dead onyx sea 
Matters not at all if you crawl
You really hurt me

Flowers gifts won’t fix it
And even if you do change
Trust in lust what you did
Nothing will be the same

I can forgive go on with 
My life for it is my own
But I don’t desire your kiss
My heart has to move on

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Gershon Wolf January 25, 2025 at 7:22 PM Onyx a good choice of stone --- as you 'nix' this fellow. ~ gw

Kim Rodrigues January 25, 2025 at 7:56 AM The rain falls as I bawl A deep dead onyx sea…losing something of the heart is always hard. I remember bawling.. Karen Jones January 25, 2025 at 1:02 PM Yes those heartbreaks stay in your memory!

Ink Empress January 25, 2025 at 1:41 AM Sigh i feel your pain and heartache through this very well woven poem! I love how youv described the sea of emotions and how youv used the stone onyx here is so profound and creative dear karen. Yes sometimes we forgive but feel like nothing changes and we will end up getting hurt again. Such a sincere and soul stirring poem this is! Pleasure reading this. Sending you light today and always Karen Jones January 25, 2025 at 1:48 AM Thanks Inky!