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Moving On

The din of cheers will die to dusk, in life the dance will end; we take the bow from this tall tale - goodbye to strife at end of day- our story’s done now we say, we had our chance, we had our dance. Shall I now say you had me in a twirl- locked in your embrace I felt my once shy moves – slow waltz in time; but now that girl you knew, to your final tune will dance no more, will dance no more – for life is calling- the sequel must begin; who knows where it will lead, what store of dreams will unfold the applause we crave, or quell the tide of hope that’s bubbling, in spring awaiting that season of reaping to glorious sunshine, minds mating.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 8/22/2012 7:11:00 AM
A belated congratulations on your featured poem this week Sherese. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/15/2012 7:46:00 AM
Sherese, I am going through your poems and I am enjoying the writes of an excellent poet. Thanks for your encouraging words and feel free to stop by me any time. One love! Joy Wells.
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Sherese Gooden
Date: 7/15/2012 2:04:00 PM
Thanks for appreciating, Joy. Please drop by anytime.
Date: 7/4/2012 4:02:00 PM
Very nice... Terry
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Sherese Gooden
Date: 7/15/2012 2:06:00 PM
Thanks, Terry.
Date: 6/30/2012 11:01:00 PM
Nice sonnet Sherese...enjoyed!!!
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Sherese Gooden
Date: 7/1/2012 5:06:00 PM
Thanks!
Date: 6/30/2012 10:02:00 AM
didn't you have two more poems?..
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Sherese Gooden
Date: 6/30/2012 6:55:00 PM
I just checked and they are really not posted. What could have happened? Is this the usual pattern, here today gone tomorrow?
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Sherese Gooden
Date: 6/30/2012 6:33:00 PM
Yes I did. They are still there.
Date: 6/30/2012 10:01:00 AM
nicely penned Sherese... Joseph
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Sherese Gooden
Date: 7/1/2012 5:06:00 PM
Thanks!
Date: 6/30/2012 5:46:00 AM
Welcome to Poetry Soup Sherese..enjoyed your morning read!!
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Sherese Gooden
Date: 7/1/2012 5:07:00 PM
Thank you.
Date: 6/30/2012 4:32:00 AM
Welcome to P-Soup Sherese - this was a pleasant written poem - well done. - oxox Anne-Lise
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Sherese Gooden
Date: 7/1/2012 5:07:00 PM
Thank you.
Date: 6/29/2012 11:15:00 PM
welcome to the soup with this nice poem,another Jamaican nice
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Sherese Gooden
Date: 7/1/2012 5:17:00 PM
Hi yardie!
Date: 6/29/2012 9:44:00 PM
Welcome to PS! Cool Sonnet and look forward to reading more of your poems.
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Sherese Gooden
Date: 7/1/2012 5:18:00 PM
Thank you.

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