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Moving On

I wanted to bid you all farewell I am moving on to greener local pastures.. Meeting poets in person and spending time on their own blogs...

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Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 5/13/2011 7:07:00 PM

You are always welcome, mourning mist

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 5/13/2011 7:06:00 PM

Thanks for the comments. The common noun moor refers to a black African man as in Shakespeare's play Othello who is referred to as a moor.

James Ph. Kotsybar

Date: 5/13/2011 6:34:00 PM

Thanks for your comments on my poetry. I agree with your critique that the first stanza of Transmography spoils the light hearted nature of the piece. I am going to remove it. It's just that when one has submitted as much poetry as I have to so many publishers with only a "Thank you for your submission," it's hard to feel like its a nourishing experience. Good luck with your pastures, I hope they stay as green as they now seem.