Karam Misra Poet Senryu

Moving Ahead

potholed  ,  boulder   strewn 
winding   path   up   steep  inclines
unwavering   goal 

water  cascades  down 
wearing  ,  skirting  , bounding rocks
I  will   make  my  way 

~07 Jul 2016~

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Al Juman July 11, 2016 at 3:32 AM nice courage my friend Karam Misra July 11, 2016 at 3:36 AM Thank you, Juman. ~karam~

Frederick Espiritu July 8, 2016 at 6:36 AM facing any hindrance to have a goal... nice senryu... Karam Misra July 8, 2016 at 6:39 AM Thank you for the visit, Frederick, and for the compliment. ~karam~

David Smith July 8, 2016 at 6:20 AM Yes. Life is an obstacle course. I think you have the resources to tackle it. Your mountains are bigger than ours. Your description of water meeting rock is beautiful. Do keep writing. David from NZ Karam Misra July 8, 2016 at 6:29 AM Thank you for the visit and your encouragement, David. ~karam~

Casarah Nance July 7, 2016 at 9:01 AM Sounds like an adventure full of obstacles, keep going the right direction : ) Karam Misra July 7, 2016 at 9:07 AM Keep on moving, yeah! That's right, Casarah. Thanks for dropping by. ~karam~