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Moving

Having you gone, Gathered up and leaving, I watch you go trampling The trodden track. I am thinking of nothing now, Not out of love or grieving, Just you across The open field And nothing feeling.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 1/5/2009 11:00:00 PM
Very well written my friend! Super alliteration and atmosphere. Best wishes, Keith
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