Move On

I must move on keep goals in sight make haste while there is sun and light. More roads to walk more hills to climb before the dark and cold of night. Sandra M. Haight ~5th Place~ Contest: 8-Line Poem 1-5 words Sponsor: Rick Parise Theme Chosen: Death Judged: 11/10/2017

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James Inman

Date: 11/21/2017 4:25:00 AM

I like this deep poem very much Sandra.

John Michaels

Date: 11/11/2017 6:40:00 AM

Lovely poem, Sandra. Congrats on your win. Regards, John.

Sandra Haight
Date: 11/11/2017 8:30:00 AM

Thank you so much, John. Sandra

Curtis Johnson

Date: 11/10/2017 10:51:00 PM

Congrats on your placement Sandra. It was a delight to read.

Line Gauthier

Date: 11/10/2017 10:23:00 PM

Charming poem

Sandra Haight
Date: 11/11/2017 8:29:00 AM

Thank you, Line. Glad you enjoyed it. Sandra

Gregory Richard Barden

Date: 11/10/2017 7:05:00 PM

Amen, Sandra, when we stop moving and stop learning, we stop living ... reminds me of Robert Frost, wonderful rhythm and rhyme ... congrats on your win, friend! :-) <3

Sandra Haight
Date: 11/11/2017 8:28:00 AM

Thank you for your very uplifting comments, Gregory! Much appreciated. Sandra

Winged Warrior

Date: 11/10/2017 5:56:00 PM

Congrats!!! Sandra...a lovely write my friend...god bless...^WW^

Sandra Haight
Date: 11/11/2017 8:27:00 AM

Thank you so much, ^WW^! Sandra

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 11/10/2017 5:43:00 PM

Very nice Sandra! Congrats!

Sandra Haight
Date: 11/11/2017 8:27:00 AM

Thank you very much, Kim. Hugs, Sandra

Agnes Krampe

Date: 11/7/2017 6:17:00 PM

Reading your poem, I was reminded of Frost's "miles to go before I sleep". Very nice one, Sandra - good luck in the contest.

Sandra Haight
Date: 11/7/2017 6:20:00 PM

Thank you, Agnes. Actually, I had entered a longer version of this poem in a contest here last year whereby we had to write a poem in the style of our favorite poet, and mine is indeed Robert Frost, and the poem you mention was the one I was using as a guide! You know your poets well! Thanks for the nice comment. Hugs, Sandra

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 11/6/2017 5:51:00 PM

Sandra i like this Rhyme. It has message here. Well done my friend. have a nice evening my friend.

Sandra Haight
Date: 11/7/2017 6:21:00 PM

Thank you very much, Darlene, for your visit and supportive comment. Sandra