Move on

Once the moment passes It can never be recaptured Neither dissected ~ nor resurrected

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Shirley Hawkins

Date: 2/25/2024 8:24:00 PM

Words of wisdom, Gershon, you excel in this form of rhyme. l enjoy reading, thank you.

Gershon Wolf
Date: 2/25/2024 8:26:00 PM

Appreciate your enthusiasm for this one, Shirley. Blessings, Gershon

Bill Baker

Date: 2/24/2024 10:00:00 PM

A little wisdom for us, gw. Thanks for sharing, BB

Michael Tor

Date: 2/24/2024 8:24:00 PM

So true my friend, insightful words with so much truth...

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 2/24/2024 11:44:00 AM

But still, I wonder! Perhaps in heaven!

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 2/24/2024 1:15:00 AM

One always hopes differently but I have come around to your way of thinking .Poetic wishes and hugs Jennifer.

Joe Maverick

Date: 2/23/2024 12:41:00 PM

Well for one thing i see you are not a demo..? Er.. gogue.? as eye observe that things go..? I mean as in gravity, like a rock thrown off a Cliff..' Don't think they could make it fly.?? Yet Would they try.?????

John Lawless

Date: 2/23/2024 5:40:00 AM

but it may return in fitful sleep to torment you....