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Lyric to a simple song I recently wrote on the keyboard. Simple but catchy. * I am grateful for a gift of renewal of my membership today. I tried to put song here,,but file is too big. I recorded it over shorter, but no luck yet. Will keep trying :) * I cut the song short, to get it here. Let me fly Let me love Let me be Who I want to be Cause high above Holds everything To bring to me Oh, so free! Chorus: So, move me with wind Move me with the sun Move me, move me With the moon *Chorus Repeat __________________________ Oh, Let me know Let me learn Let me grow To understand Cause high above Holds everything To bring to me Oh so free! Chorus: So, move me with the wind Move me with the sun Move me, move me, With the moon *Chorus repeat, fade. ___________________________________ Heidi Sands 7/27/19

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Date: 8/20/2019 9:03:00 PM
Hello Heidi … a very catchy tune indeed. Uplifting and with lyrics added certain to make a very good song - well done Heidi - Lindsay
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Heidi Sands
Date: 8/21/2019 7:17:00 AM
Thank you Lindsay. You reminded me I have to get to updating it when I can. I appreciate your kind comment. Have a nice day :)
Date: 8/4/2019 9:24:00 AM
Enjoyed the music, Heidi..lively..upbeat!
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Heidi Sands
Date: 8/4/2019 10:56:00 AM
Thank you Vijay I am happy you enjoyed it. Have a nice day :)
Date: 7/28/2019 7:34:00 PM
What a talent you are, Heidi! Blew me away. A FAV Panagiota
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Heidi Sands
Date: 7/28/2019 7:57:00 PM
Thank you so much for your kindness. I appreciate it very much. Goodnight :)
Date: 7/28/2019 1:41:00 PM
I enjoyed your song, thanks for sharing with us.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 7/28/2019 1:51:00 PM
Thank you Richard. And you are welcome. I am happy you enjoyed it. It is better to hear the music with it , if I can get that done, but still. A simple song:)
Date: 7/28/2019 10:24:00 AM
Lovely lyrics Heidi you've penned this extremely well. Well done!
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Heidi Sands
Date: 7/28/2019 12:12:00 PM
Thank you very much Gordon :)
Date: 7/28/2019 9:25:00 AM
Well done...."Move me with the wind" Nice one...
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Heidi Sands
Date: 7/28/2019 9:53:00 AM
Thank you Arturo! Have a nice day :)
Date: 7/28/2019 7:48:00 AM
Lovely lyrics Heidi..
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Heidi Sands
Date: 7/28/2019 8:26:00 AM
Thank you Joseph. I appreciate all your support. Have a nice day :)
Date: 7/28/2019 7:17:00 AM
WOW! This is a lovely lovely song, Heidi..so enjoyed the words and the tone of your write..beautifully done--this is my FAVE.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 7/28/2019 8:26:00 AM
Hi Vijay. Thank you so much. I will try to get the music here when I can. I am working on one you commented on previously now.. I appreciate the fav and all your support ! :)
Date: 7/28/2019 3:45:00 AM
These lyrics are so uplifting Heidi, they are beautiful and to hear them with music would be a real treat! I hope you are well. With kindest thoughts Ann xx
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Heidi Sands
Date: 7/28/2019 6:44:00 AM
Hi Ann thank you for your kind thoughts.i appreciate your support . It was fun. I hope you have a nice day :)
Date: 7/27/2019 8:12:00 PM
Hi Heidi, I enjoyed the positivity of your lyrics. I would love to hear that actual song. Enjoy the rest of your day:-) Alexis
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Heidi Sands
Date: 7/27/2019 8:17:00 PM
Thank you very much Alexis. It is kind of upbeat with a shuffle rock rhythm. Have a nice evening :)

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