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The sea churned and spewed forth a mighty roar As the funnel formed in the not so far distance I admired the beauty, but feared to the core As my feet, to stay, offered resistance T’is just a fool who would stay out this storm It’s smarter to take shelter or even hide No, I didn’t want to incur any harm To where, is what I must decide To the schools, ah yes, they were built brick by brick There’s strength in the building, surely it is safe Though the storm brewed oh, so very thick As upon me then fell a twenty foot wave My breath, my heart, I panicked, but yet I tried I did my best to acquire as much air as I could Successfully escaping the depths, I then cried And ran as far away as I knew I then should

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 2/3/2009 8:51:00 AM
This is sometimes how I feel when I face the health issues my husband has right now, like I'm drowning. Thank you for your best wishes and prayers. I am taking a "ME" day today in hopes of rejuvinating my soul and recharging my big gray delco for the up-coming rounds, as the fight is far from over. But you all help to keep me sane. Thank you so much! ~TRU
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Date: 2/3/2009 8:39:00 AM
Like this form Michael.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments
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Date: 2/3/2009 8:37:00 AM
Can be a frightening thing, or a soothing thing...the ocean in it's many temperments has such a fickle nature...love your own journey through this one. ~ love, Carrie
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