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Mouth-Watering Lust

as my eyes devour you -- I’m filled with mouth-watering cravings of lust



Susan Ashley
July 24, 2017


~ Second Place ~
Premiere Contest: Lust
Sponsor: Lewis Raynes

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Paul Callus

December 9, 2017 at 5:16 PM

That's what happens to me when I eat watermelon, Susan:) :) The effect is beyond control! I love this monoku which does not beat around the bush...desire is not to be denied. ~ Warm regards // paul

Susan Ashley

December 9, 2017 at 11:21 PM

Ahh, so watermelon is your weakness..? I don't blame you Paul, watermelon is amazing! I'm glad you loved this poem. This was the first monoku I had ever written, I hadn't even heard of it until I looked at the contest. I was thrilled when it placed second. Thank you my wonderful friend for your attention to my poems, it is truly appreciated. Warmest wishes ~Susan

Maria Williams

November 17, 2017 at 6:27 AM

Saucy and lustfully mouth-watering my dear friend Susan - I've just been clicking on your poems of yours that I haven't seen before and my eye caught this gem. Congrats on your placing - I loved it ...Maria xxx

Susan Ashley

November 17, 2017 at 1:56 PM

Welcome back dear Maria, it's wonderful to know you're back from your trip.. Thank you for your awesome comment, I'm so happy you enjoyed it! Your precious friendship, thoughts and visits are so appreciated, and I always welcome your graceful presence to my poetry page. Warmest wishes to you always.. ~Susan

Jan Allison

September 25, 2017 at 5:24 PM

so few words say so much! Many congrats Susan:-) hugs jan xx

Susan Ashley

November 17, 2017 at 2:06 PM

Jan, I apologize for the lateness in my reply... Thank you so very much for your lovely comment and sincere congrats. Your lovely presence on my poetry page is so very appreciated. My very warmest wishes always.. ~Susan