Mouthful

megaphone bemoan
                                         ignoramus laureate 
                                      soapbox needs a wash






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Jeff Connelly

Date: 3/27/2019 11:27:00 AM

Wonderful wording. Soap and wash and the language blurted from the box. And your title slips nicely in when I go back and read it again. Maureen have you ever read a poet on this site named Elsa Rosee? I believe I've spelled the name correctly. This is my weekend and though I spend a lot of time on line with mi Musa I am spending more time reading your and Elsa's poetry. Humbly standing before there.

Joe Dimino

Date: 2/19/2018 6:35:00 AM

Ain't that the truth. Soap and mops for all. I hate soapboxes and megaphones. Too loud and above for real, level communication.

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 2/19/2018 8:25:00 AM

Yuppers. An elevated one way highway is not conducive to grounded two way communication. This was a cathartic exercise :)

Gershon Wolf

Date: 1/30/2018 10:59:00 PM

Wow! Awesome putdown! ---He/she so needs to read it! So much expressed in just three lines! Bravo! Gershon

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 1/30/2018 11:35:00 PM

Lol! I sorta hope not ;) Thank you Gershon xomo!

Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 1/30/2018 11:12:00 AM

Cool slam, Maureen! This beaut was a mouthful ... lol! Sweet poem ... I LOVE it. Love and hug, baby.

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 1/30/2018 11:53:00 AM

Thank you dear poet! All the best to you my friend :) xomo!

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 1/30/2018 9:14:00 AM

Good one! Loud and clear.

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 1/30/2018 10:18:00 AM

Thank you Kim :)

Silent One

Date: 1/29/2018 7:34:00 AM

Awesome pen mo!

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 1/29/2018 7:42:00 AM

Thank you SO :) xomo!

Susan Ashley

Date: 1/28/2018 7:53:00 PM

Written with a sharpened quill Maureen! What a gem, love the title, love every line, especially the last. Great write with a keen edge. Warmest wishes ~Susan

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 1/29/2018 7:40:00 AM

Thank you Susan :) muchos hugs xomo!