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Mouthful

megaphone bemoan ignoramus laureate soapbox needs a wash ***

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Date: 3/27/2019 11:27:00 AM
Wonderful wording. Soap and wash and the language blurted from the box. And your title slips nicely in when I go back and read it again. Maureen have you ever read a poet on this site named Elsa Rosee? I believe I've spelled the name correctly. This is my weekend and though I spend a lot of time on line with mi Musa I am spending more time reading your and Elsa's poetry. Humbly standing before there.
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Date: 2/19/2018 6:35:00 AM
Ain't that the truth. Soap and mops for all. I hate soapboxes and megaphones. Too loud and above for real, level communication.
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Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 2/19/2018 8:25:00 AM
Yuppers. An elevated one way highway is not conducive to grounded two way communication. This was a cathartic exercise :)
Date: 1/30/2018 10:59:00 PM
Wow! Awesome putdown! ---He/she so needs to read it! So much expressed in just three lines! Bravo! Gershon
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Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 1/30/2018 11:35:00 PM
Lol! I sorta hope not ;) Thank you Gershon xomo!
Date: 1/30/2018 11:12:00 AM
Cool slam, Maureen! This beaut was a mouthful ... lol! Sweet poem ... I LOVE it. Love and hug, baby.
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Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 1/30/2018 11:53:00 AM
Thank you dear poet! All the best to you my friend :) xomo!
Date: 1/30/2018 9:14:00 AM
Good one! Loud and clear.
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Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 1/30/2018 10:18:00 AM
Thank you Kim :)
Date: 1/29/2018 7:34:00 AM
Awesome pen mo!
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Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 1/29/2018 7:42:00 AM
Thank you SO :) xomo!
Date: 1/28/2018 7:53:00 PM
Written with a sharpened quill Maureen! What a gem, love the title, love every line, especially the last. Great write with a keen edge. Warmest wishes ~Susan
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Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 1/29/2018 7:40:00 AM
Thank you Susan :) muchos hugs xomo!
Date: 1/28/2018 5:36:00 PM
Well written Senryu Maureen :)
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Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 1/29/2018 7:40:00 AM
Thank you Heidi :) xomo!
Date: 1/28/2018 5:23:00 PM
Mouthwash? Nice imagery...All the best Maureen
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Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 1/29/2018 7:39:00 AM
Ever had your mouth washed out with soap? I have, a taste you NEVER forget lol ;) xomo!
Date: 1/28/2018 4:52:00 PM
Indeed incisive, but a brilliant senryu!
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Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 1/29/2018 7:38:00 AM
Thank you Mick! Your seal of approval most appreciated ;) xomo <3
Date: 1/28/2018 3:09:00 PM
much truth in this incisive senryu, maureen... well done.. huggs
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Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 1/29/2018 7:36:00 AM
Thank you Nette :) xomo!
Date: 1/28/2018 2:48:00 PM
Multiple messages well expressed dear, Maureen!
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Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 1/29/2018 7:35:00 AM
Thank you my dear Demetrios :) xomo!
Date: 1/28/2018 1:41:00 PM
I can relate:-) hugs Jan xx
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Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 1/28/2018 1:46:00 PM
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