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Mouth Watering Egg

mouth watering egg
                                  taste lies in soft yellow yolk
                                        outer shell allures

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Harry Horsman

October 16, 2015 at 8:45 PM

again i love your short poetry.

Bl Devnath

October 24, 2015 at 10:07 AM

Many thanks my lovely friend for your appreciation and credit. Loved always,bl

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

October 13, 2015 at 10:39 PM

hehehe Bl when I saw the title I can't but smile and I did more when I read your senryu!!!~Olive Eloisa =`)

Bl Devnath

October 14, 2015 at 11:46 AM

Thanks God that my poem has brought smile. Thanks for your lovely comment my lovely friend. Loved always,bl

Catherine Labeau

October 13, 2015 at 5:32 PM

and the crack of the shell hard to take to swallow it all

Bl Devnath

October 14, 2015 at 11:44 AM

Yes, you are right. Thanks for your beautiful comment my lovely friend. Loved always,bl

Andrea Dietrich

October 6, 2015 at 7:02 PM

this is very nice. Actually I prefer the white part when it is cooked!!

Bl Devnath

October 14, 2015 at 11:43 AM

Thanks my lovely friend for your comment. Loved always,bl

Demetrios Trifiatis

October 6, 2015 at 1:28 AM

Brilliant, my friend, BLD! A7.

Bl Devnath

October 6, 2015 at 1:10 PM

Thanks my lovely friend for your support. Though it's funny but surely carries a great philosophy related to our sight and aspiration. Loved always my lovely friend,bl