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Mouth Betrays

Have you ever met serial "slipper, makes one uncomfortable with the slip of his tongue; it is so embarrassing. For someone it's a slur, no more a quip. Why people betrayed by their mouths with slip? To stop this none discovered medicine. People say between two to six words per second with one's talk that's irrelevant. Using wrong word creates embarrassment cause "reveals secret desire forbidden by society or self", Studies say. Unconscious wishes win, what kept hidden. Before mind goes to censor mode, hidden thought blurts, can't resist to slips, studies say. ~X~X~X~
Poetic Form :: Kal’s Wondercloth Weave Invented by Jose Rizal M. Reyes of the Philippines Meter: Consistent or iambic pentameter Volta: Not Defined rhyming pattern: abcb bcdc cded de Format: English (quatrain, quatrain, quatrain, couplet) Pasted from http://poetscollective.org/everysonnet/kals-wondercloth-weave/ Thanks to Mr Lawrence Eberhart for the resource at Poets COLLECTIVE Site.

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Date: 10/31/2021 10:09:00 AM
Great sonnet with meaning. Fantastic. Being human, soemetimes misinterpreted! Appreciate your notes very much. Thank you, thoughtful poet Panagiota
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Pratap Roy
Date: 10/31/2021 7:32:00 PM
Thank you very much for your time to read and comment. God bless you.

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