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Mouse Rap

There's a mouse in my house It just ran under the couch I really hate to say it But I don't think I can take it. There's a mouse in my house I'm really quite annoyed There's some bread on the floor It must have really enjoyed. There's a mouse in my house I just hit it with my shoe It really seems quite dead now Think I'll flush it down the loo. Josette Key 2009

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Date: 10/13/2013 9:28:00 PM
cute and clever write. Full of humor and imagination. The reader gets a smile and laugh at the mouses antics nice job
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Date: 4/10/2009 7:01:00 PM
oh my jojoseven, very cool poem, I'll buy the chidren's book issue, jmg
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Date: 4/5/2009 6:21:00 PM
Smiling while reading,huh,guess you found the perfect mouse trap.Enjoyable.....Jim
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Date: 4/5/2009 3:26:00 AM
ooo! that last line is sad ... but i ll hate something running around the house so small... cute write! ~ Arany
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