Mouse Rap

There's a mouse in my house It just ran under the couch I really hate to say But I don't think I can take it. There's a mouse in my house I'm really quite annoyed There's some bread on the floor It must have really enjoyed. There's a mouse in my house Think I'll hit it with my shoe It seems to be quite dead now Think I'll flush it down the loo. Josette Key 2008

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Valerie Bellefleur

Date: 8/25/2008 5:03:00 PM

Short and to the point! Great write! Just what we feel about mice..

Michael Jordan

Date: 8/23/2008 8:37:00 PM

Josette - Once while I was sitting in County waiting on the next bus to Prison and right at lights out a mouse came out from under the door - we went to war - 40 convicts against one mouse - Funny what one poem can remind you of - Thanks - God Bless

James Foulk

Date: 8/23/2008 5:56:00 PM

that poor little mousey. but they are a bad thing to have in your house, i hate using mouse traps, but there is a trap, where you trap them alive then take them out side. this was a good poem.