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Mourning Vitality

MOURNING VITALITY umbrellas open black multitudinous sea dark glasses mask tears vitality drained too soon whispers of a well-lived life could not keep - her smile, her radiant eyes, cocooned time still found her tomb sublime red roses rush in covering-blush of coffin 8/3/2017

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Date: 8/3/2017 3:16:00 PM
This is lovely Kim. A black multitudinous sea of umbrellas; very descriptive.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/3/2017 3:30:00 PM
Thanks, Dean. My sweet Aunt's funeral was today. I was not able to go. Poetry can be cathartic.
Date: 8/3/2017 2:34:00 PM
Very well written Kim! :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/3/2017 2:39:00 PM
Thank you, Heidi
Date: 8/3/2017 2:18:00 PM
You are absolutely right. If I had ever been able to paint or draw like my brother I would have depicted just this scene. Very nicely done.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/3/2017 2:39:00 PM
Thanks, Dale

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