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Mourning of Valley

mourning of valley    

                 on 
                   verdant valley,
                       wild weeds weep,
                            while feral creeper
                                           secretes tears.


     03/20/21

                                                   First Place
    'Les get creative with Haiku'   Contest

     by Constance La France,

                                                     First Place
  'All Yours (Apr 14 ) Contest by Brian Strand
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Stathakis Avatar
April 19, 2021 at 9:45 PM
Congratulations. Love the alliteration
Holmes Avatar
April 15, 2021 at 1:41 PM
Congratulations on your win - a wonderful poem of imagery, David Holmes
Merryman Avatar
April 14, 2021 at 1:49 PM
I see more congrats are due you for Brian's contest! Your haiku is lovely! Blessings, Kim M
La France Avatar
March 24, 2021 at 3:14 PM
Anisha, congratulations on your win in my challenge Let's Get Creative with Haiku and you did exactly that, I love this excellent non traditional Haiku, well done_Constance
Ligon Avatar
March 24, 2021 at 8:17 AM
Beautiful! Congratulations!
Allison Avatar
March 22, 2021 at 4:19 PM
This is very clever Anisha and i love the accompanying video, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
Dutta Avatar
March 22, 2021 at 10:05 PM
Thanks JAN. I appreciate your adjective 'Clever'. Love.
Merryman Avatar
March 22, 2021 at 4:19 PM
Beautiful imagery, Anisha! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim M
Dietrich Avatar
March 22, 2021 at 2:10 PM
gorgeous words and picture.
Dutta Avatar
March 22, 2021 at 10:05 PM
Thank Andrea. Hugs.
Neumann Avatar
March 22, 2021 at 1:40 PM
Wonderful. Congratulations on your winning poem
Dutta Avatar
March 22, 2021 at 10:02 PM
Thanks Michael. Blessing
Y. Avatar
March 22, 2021 at 11:37 AM
Hi Anisha, Congratulations on your 1st place win. It was well deserved. Have a great day:-) Alexis
Dutta Avatar
March 22, 2021 at 10:03 PM
Thanks Alexis. Blessing
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