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Mourning light in shared despair

We laid hands on your empty corpse We stretched hands to touch your soul We cried sympathetically looking through your grave We cursed the provocation that sounded your death knell But again we are here and mourning Crying for our beloved friend In the depths of sorrow, we find solace In the darkness, we seek the light The memories of you linger in our hearts A reminder of a life once bright A fate worse than death, a loss profound But in our grief, we are bound Bound by love and shared despair Bound by the memories we all bear So we mourn, we weep, we remember For in our hearts, you will live forever A fate worse than death, we survived But in our love, you will always thrive.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 6/29/2012 11:34:00 AM
Your poetic words paint a poignant picture...that death would be better than life. I agree, it is worse for the survivors to deal with the loss of a loved one.
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Mpho Leteng
Date: 8/27/2012 10:12:00 AM
srry 4 tha late reply & thank u 4 leaving a comment on ma work
Date: 5/6/2012 6:36:00 PM
beautiful
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Mpho Leteng
Date: 8/27/2012 10:13:00 AM
thnx
Date: 5/2/2012 11:20:00 PM
STUPENDOUS WRITE!!! I enjoyed this much.You truly have writing skills......Elliott.....
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