mourning has broken

it started as still another day in a place of previous paradise
all his crows had screamed for sorrow grief and lament
for too long and not long enough in a timeline of sadness
with the focus on loss of what had been and would never resume
of what was not happening right now in the presence of loneliness

normally and he was questioning what a new normal would look like
they would be rolling in the sheets passionate and breathless
choosing positions massage oil and scented wax candles
skimpy lingerie in the wet spot of desire longing and comfort

now the best he could do is burn Palo Santo holy wood
for cleansing the space of previous togetherness and bliss
at least he had removed her eccentric clutter from the boudoir
to be sorted elsewhere and yet the memories remained

almost twenty years of intimacy had gone up in smoke
for hers is a spiritual path of independence and self-discovery
and his means an unknown future of how and who he would be

lube bottles are lying idle now and sex toys are gathering dust
perfumes are fading with the touches caresses cuddles and pleasure
and then there was so much more that they cherished on top
and from the bottom of their hearts and yet the mourning has broken
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Godwin Avatar
March 10, 2026 at 8:46 AM
Who you are is also a spiritual being on a human journey not a human seeking spirituality. Have you gotten angry yet? There are layered whys in break ups just like dust stilled toys. Shake up your space, routines. Paint bananas on the walls. The 'leaver' doesn't have a memory blanket sown from pain's thread wrapped around them. The 'leftbehinder' needs to change their channel, in time you'll be ready. Love yourself, not talking about the toys. This write also got me & made me talk too much.
Neumann Avatar
March 11, 2026 at 3:11 AM
I shall not wear a memory blanket of pain, that is for sure. My biggest defect now is impatience, I want the separation at least legally done and dusted. Sending you kind wishes and thank you, Kai
Godwin Avatar
March 10, 2026 at 8:50 AM
I will read more once I have absorbed as an empath must. I'll try not to over comment again, as a feeler of my brothers and sisters, my incite and intuition just flow.
Vaso Avatar
March 9, 2026 at 2:20 AM
Liked how you told this!
Neumann Avatar
March 9, 2026 at 2:44 AM
Thank you. I told it as it is ...
May Avatar
March 8, 2026 at 5:06 PM
Very nicely penned, everything went awry
Neumann Avatar
March 9, 2026 at 1:53 AM
'Went awry' sounds a bit like a euphemism. But, the protagonist has choices now and the chance to build a new future. And, to live in the present day. Thank you for your comment and kind wishes, Kai
Goldsmith Avatar
March 8, 2026 at 9:42 AM
What a powerful write/story you have here. Have a very blessed day/week writing away............
Neumann Avatar
March 8, 2026 at 10:28 AM
Thank you Paula. Kind wishes, Kai
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