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5/5/2024...Mountebank...Edward Ibeh's Contest...Yalto Form

 

“That’s all I can stands, ‘cause I can’t stands no more.”
—Popeye, Popeye the Sailor animated series

One episode, “The Fistic Mystic,”
takes place in Badgag, a parody of Bagdad. 

Mountebank Olive Oil, a snake charmer. Bluto wraps around her. He is a shyster - a bully with tricks. One pop eye on him - the sailor misdirects. Mischief in Badgag - a mountebank devil, picked the wrong g-oil.

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Date: 5/16/2024 3:35:00 PM
How nice to see you write a Yalto--and a funny one at that!--after a while. Well done, Kim. Heartiest congratulations on your win in my contest!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/16/2024 6:18:00 PM
Glad you liked it! I write what comes to mind. :)
Date: 5/12/2024 12:45:00 PM
Too funny...the wrong g-oil. You have a knack for humor!!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/12/2024 6:45:00 PM
Thank you much. Hugs ~ Kim
Date: 5/7/2024 6:23:00 PM
Before my time, but I get a gist of what you're writing about.... <3 enjoyable read hugs
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/7/2024 7:04:00 PM
You should check out one of the episodes. Thank you, Paige!
Date: 5/6/2024 9:36:00 PM
Very enjoyable Kim. I think I saw that cartoon. I love popeye!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/7/2024 7:03:00 PM
It was a fun and unique one! Eat your spinach…lol.
Date: 5/6/2024 5:43:00 AM
You described him splendidly---they are thieves!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/6/2024 7:07:00 AM
Thank you, Vijay! :)
Date: 5/5/2024 6:34:00 PM
Haha! Dear Kim, I adore the nostalgic feel (was a Sunday morning Popeye fan.. dating myself.. lol!), clever wordplay and the wit of this fantastic poem. Love the last line! Best wishes for a win in the contest and warmest wishes for you.. ~Susan
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/5/2024 9:53:00 PM
Thank you, Susan! LOL
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