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Mountainside

the majestic and picturesque snow capped mountains left me captivated the view was breathtaking inhaling the fresh air was invigorating the tranquil breeze skimmed the surface of my skin and left me breathless peace and serenity assailed my senses

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Michael Degenhardt

Date: 10/23/2008 9:35:00 AM

Such a lovely read as you place the reader there as well to enjoy the view, the feelings that you experience. Very well written. Michael

Sharon Winter

Date: 10/19/2008 10:35:00 AM

Oh so breathtaking! Please take me with you. : ) What a beautiful sight and feeling to experience. You painted it well! I am captured within your words. Love, Shar

Daver Austin

Date: 10/19/2008 7:54:00 AM

Sounds like a view I had in Aspen one summer...The Maroon Bells. Good write, Deneen. I feel refreshed. Love, Daver

Brian Strand

Date: 10/19/2008 12:22:00 AM

Thank you for your welcome comments D-nyce.Rgds Brian Have a good day

P Sheart

Date: 10/18/2008 4:15:00 PM

Hi Deneen Ahhh, you make me feel write at home. Looking out my study window I see the snow capped mountain range. This morning it was 15 degrees out. My cat stuck her nose out the door and turned to come back in with a sour puss look on her face. Winter has arrived here in Alaska. Sending warm thoughts your way my friend. Love Light Truth Patricia

Nigel Fawcett

Date: 10/18/2008 3:30:00 PM

Deneen I love the mountains more than just about anywhere else and this write really transported me there. Thanks, Nigel

Christopher Higgins

Date: 10/18/2008 10:20:00 AM

Deneen I love this a lot. It sounded like a love poem with nature. Your heart is revealed in this piece. I am digging it.

Heidie Buys

Date: 10/18/2008 7:19:00 AM

Awesome job. A beautiful painting that speaks to all the senses. Very well done. Love Heidie

Teresita Cailo

Date: 10/17/2008 11:33:00 PM

With a scene like this, sometimes you just want to stare and admire how lovely the nature is :) Teri

Lena W

Date: 10/17/2008 5:44:00 PM

something for the imagination, this sounds so blissfully wonderful. Lena

Michael Torres

Date: 10/17/2008 5:05:00 AM

Deneen this is superb. Bravo. A winner. Need I say more. God bless you Michael Torres

Michael Jordan

Date: 10/17/2008 4:15:00 AM

Deneen it won't be long until the Mountains up the road will be covered with snow - Love the view from my yard - beautiful poem hun - God Bless

Kristin Reynolds

Date: 10/17/2008 2:41:00 AM

Ah, a beautiful winter scene, lovely D, love Kristin

Diana Jackson

Date: 10/16/2008 8:27:00 PM

beautiful picture....made me feel like I was there....thanks for sharing

Chitra Lakhera

Date: 10/16/2008 7:09:00 PM

Your beautiful description says very well that it had been breathtaking! I love the mountains and this poem talks so enchantingly about them. Enjoyed the write very much:)Love, Chitra

Carrie Richards

Date: 10/16/2008 4:19:00 PM

We live just south of Mt. Shasta in Northern California, and West of Mt. Lassen (both vocano mountains). Your poem makes me cherish both mountains even more....I will step outside and appreciate them more today! Lovely! ~ Carrie

John Loving Iii

Date: 10/16/2008 4:12:00 PM

next time take me with you. enjoyed. john