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Mountainside

the majestic and
picturesque snow
capped mountains
left me
captivated
            
the view was
breathtaking
inhaling the 
fresh air was
invigorating

the tranquil breeze
skimmed the surface
of my skin
and left me breathless 

peace and serenity
assailed my senses

Copyright © Deneen White | Year Posted 2008

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Michael Degenhardt Date: 10/23/2008 9:35:00 AM Such a lovely read as you place the reader there as well to enjoy the view, the feelings that you experience. Very well written. Michael Login to Reply

Sharon Winter Date: 10/19/2008 10:35:00 AM Oh so breathtaking! Please take me with you. : ) What a beautiful sight and feeling to experience. You painted it well! I am captured within your words. Love, Shar Login to Reply

Daver Austin Date: 10/19/2008 7:54:00 AM Sounds like a view I had in Aspen one summer...The Maroon Bells. Good write, Deneen. I feel refreshed. Love, Daver Login to Reply

Brian Strand Date: 10/19/2008 12:22:00 AM Thank you for your welcome comments D-nyce.Rgds Brian Have a good day Login to Reply

P Sheart Date: 10/18/2008 4:15:00 PM Hi Deneen Ahhh, you make me feel write at home. Looking out my study window I see the snow capped mountain range. This morning it was 15 degrees out. My cat stuck her nose out the door and turned to come back in with a sour puss look on her face. Winter has arrived here in Alaska. Sending warm thoughts your way my friend. Love Light Truth Patricia Login to Reply

Nigel Fawcett Date: 10/18/2008 3:30:00 PM Deneen I love the mountains more than just about anywhere else and this write really transported me there. Thanks, Nigel Login to Reply

Christopher Higgins Date: 10/18/2008 10:20:00 AM Deneen I love this a lot. It sounded like a love poem with nature. Your heart is revealed in this piece. I am digging it. Login to Reply

Heidie Buys Date: 10/18/2008 7:19:00 AM Awesome job. A beautiful painting that speaks to all the senses. Very well done. Love Heidie Login to Reply

Teresita Cailo Date: 10/17/2008 11:33:00 PM With a scene like this, sometimes you just want to stare and admire how lovely the nature is :) Teri Login to Reply

Lena W Date: 10/17/2008 5:44:00 PM something for the imagination, this sounds so blissfully wonderful. Lena Login to Reply

Michael Torres Date: 10/17/2008 5:05:00 AM Deneen this is superb. Bravo. A winner. Need I say more. God bless you Michael Torres Login to Reply

Michael Jordan Date: 10/17/2008 4:15:00 AM Deneen it won't be long until the Mountains up the road will be covered with snow - Love the view from my yard - beautiful poem hun - God Bless Login to Reply

Kristin Reynolds Date: 10/17/2008 2:41:00 AM Ah, a beautiful winter scene, lovely D, love Kristin Login to Reply

Diana Jackson Date: 10/16/2008 8:27:00 PM beautiful picture....made me feel like I was there....thanks for sharing Login to Reply

Chitra Lakhera Date: 10/16/2008 7:09:00 PM Your beautiful description says very well that it had been breathtaking! I love the mountains and this poem talks so enchantingly about them. Enjoyed the write very much:)Love, Chitra Login to Reply

Carrie Richards Date: 10/16/2008 4:19:00 PM We live just south of Mt. Shasta in Northern California, and West of Mt. Lassen (both vocano mountains). Your poem makes me cherish both mountains even more....I will step outside and appreciate them more today! Lovely! ~ Carrie Login to Reply

John Loving Iii Date: 10/16/2008 4:12:00 PM next time take me with you. enjoyed. john Login to Reply