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Mountains Touch The Sky

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Mountains Touch The Sky

as one with the clouds
enfold within still layers...
mountains touch the sky
For P.D.'s "Haiku Mountain Week Contest" Written:July 2012 By: Carol Brown 1st Place Winner

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Date: 8/9/2013 7:18:00 AM
Wish we can work together, get to contact me on akoladeadewunmi@gmail.com
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Date: 8/9/2013 7:17:00 AM
Thanks for your encouragement, i wish you all the best. Love
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Date: 1/11/2013 9:38:00 PM
Yes, a rocking win for my contest... i like the peak in the clouds...pd
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Date: 11/15/2012 11:30:00 AM
The Rainy Mountain On the top of it and down to the river The rain drops are carefully falling. Around, everything looks up in wonder The mountain too but always up amazing Never has it looked down, before, now or after. The mountain is always up and patient And people feel pride after climbing. Little do they know the way to it is eminent! But who wants to pay heed? Who cares? The sun does not set but hides behind it. And as you see! The clouds meet and kiss the head of it. Take this then from time both ancient and modern: During wind and rain, The mountain is patient. During love and hatred, The mountain is patient. But when it gets angry, Please forgive and forget. Chokri Omri
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Date: 8/17/2012 11:19:00 AM
I've dropped by in your winning piece and what a beautiful scenery painted in here. Belated congratulations my dear Carol. I just came from a choir practice in the church and just have read your message now. Have a beautiful and grace-filled weekend, too, Carol! luv, leonora
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Date: 7/18/2012 5:24:00 AM
congratulations on first place win,,,,,, blessings of the day Carol ;}
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Date: 7/16/2012 6:25:00 AM
Just stopping by to say thanks for your thoughts and inspiring words! Have a great and fantastic day! Blessing in all that you do! JP
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Date: 7/13/2012 1:03:00 PM
First place, WOW!!! I know this made your day as it was a very competitive contest, Carol,,,when I read this haiku I am breathing more relaxed as I meld with nature,,,,great work!...Also wanted to say thanks for the placement in your contest...For me it was special bc typically the judges aren't familiar with all the landmarks I write about---not the case for you with my bicycle poem about the places I traveled in our home state. Thanks again, Carol...Hope your summer is off to a great start. Been a little immobilized with the heat..
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Date: 7/13/2012 11:27:00 AM
Dreamy one, Carol. Congrats on the win. Love, daver
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Date: 7/13/2012 8:33:00 AM
beautiful Haiku, thanks for sharing it, God bless you, Hugs!Erich
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Date: 7/13/2012 8:02:00 AM
This is a gem, Carol. Thank you so much for all your encouragement. love, Kathy
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Date: 7/13/2012 5:21:00 AM
congrats Carol on a fantastic first place for this marvelous write my friend.. truly lovely as are all your sweet comments to me too.. am still dealing with head pain and on meds now.. so hubby has comment duty once again.. so appreciate your words which lift and encourage always luv..
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Date: 7/13/2012 5:12:00 AM
congrats on your win Carol
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Date: 7/13/2012 12:45:00 AM
Happy to see this do so well for you. Congrats to you, CArol.
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Date: 7/12/2012 10:14:00 PM
I also enjoy reading your poetry, Carol. You write beautifully! Amazing how such a short poem can bring me to such a lovely place. Congrats on 1st place! Well-deserved! :)
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Date: 7/12/2012 8:19:00 PM
Simply beautiful - congratulations.
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Date: 7/12/2012 6:11:00 PM
wow,well that's very nice...=)
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Date: 7/12/2012 5:25:00 PM
very good Haiku, I have a question in a Haiku contest can you enter a poem consisting of three haikus?
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Date: 7/12/2012 3:41:00 PM
Very nice Haiku... Terry
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Date: 7/12/2012 2:25:00 PM
Haiku as good as this gets a lot of recognition around here. Great write Carol.
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Date: 7/12/2012 12:15:00 PM
Hey Carol, congratulations on your win in the contest.. I enjoyed this tonight.. Hope your week has been a good one thus far and thank you for your encouragement always.. Love Wilma
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Date: 7/12/2012 9:54:00 AM
Dear Carol, Thank you for your warm welcome, and wishes. My love for haiku enticed me to read yours. It certainly evokes to the eye the watercolour-like scenery and emotion lying in a haikuist's soul. pyrgia
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Date: 7/12/2012 9:52:00 AM
Carol, Congrats on your well deserved win in the Mountain Haiku contest...enjoyed reading...Marty
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Date: 7/12/2012 7:52:00 AM
Enjoyed reading this one today..I don't know how I have missed it..Congratulations on your great win...Thanks for stopping by, your comments are always uplifting..Sara
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Date: 7/12/2012 7:19:00 AM
Thank you P.D. for the placement in your contest. It is an honor to be on the winners list with such outstanding poets. Thanks to everyone for your comments and congratulations as they are always appreciated. Love, Carol
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