Mountains By the Sea

Little by little this does                                                                                            
wash the stoniness away  					               
rocks jagged and hard must roll					   
to a sea of sand
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Tate Avatar
February 10, 2011 at 7:44 AM
Nice poem, good thoughts
Horsman Avatar
February 7, 2011 at 9:46 PM
Evolution in progress, excellent. Harry
Sweetheart Avatar
February 6, 2011 at 10:49 AM
Grand imagery John in your lines of expressive Dodoitsu form... enjoyed this mountains by the sea luv..
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February 6, 2011 at 6:26 AM
Over time those mountains are being remade into that sand..Enjoyed reading your work..I am glad that I chose this one to read this morn..Sara
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February 5, 2011 at 11:51 PM
wow, this is one cool dodoitsu!! a highest rating!
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