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Mountains By the Sea

Little by little this does wash the stoniness away rocks jagged and hard must roll to a sea of sand

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 2/10/2011 7:44:00 AM
Nice poem, good thoughts
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Date: 2/7/2011 9:46:00 PM
Evolution in progress, excellent. Harry
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Date: 2/6/2011 10:49:00 AM
Grand imagery John in your lines of expressive Dodoitsu form... enjoyed this mountains by the sea luv..
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Date: 2/6/2011 6:26:00 AM
Over time those mountains are being remade into that sand..Enjoyed reading your work..I am glad that I chose this one to read this morn..Sara
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Date: 2/5/2011 11:51:00 PM
wow, this is one cool dodoitsu!! a highest rating!
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