Mountains

Early morning first light, sneaking through 
a wandering gaze out onto a sea of fog. 
A cool and glorious mountain tree top view
away from the city traffic and smog.

Beneath the breeze's hands, nature is dining,
sipping the morning sunshine wine,
rambling through the lush green, alluring 
woodlands. Clutching moss shrouds the pine 
softening the sounds of nature.

Life savoring and nurturing the crystal clear blue water that flow
through rocks to appease the colorful fish. That feature
the thought of enchantment where your heart does go.

5/25/2017

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 8/18/2017 1:27:00 PM
Eve, such a lovely and refreshing poem to read. Congratulations on your placement. ~ Sonia
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Date: 8/17/2017 4:59:00 AM
I was transported by your words Eve! Congratulations on your lovely poem's placement. : )
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Date: 8/16/2017 8:55:00 PM
Gorgeous write, Eve, so enchanting and whimsical ... I enjoyed this very much! Blessings and congrats! :-)
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Date: 8/16/2017 7:46:00 AM
Congratulations Eve :)
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Date: 6/13/2017 2:27:00 AM
Lovely imagery, Eve - you did a great job of encapsulating the scene. Congratulations on your win. Regards, John.
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Date: 6/14/2017 7:43:00 PM
Thank you, John ~*
Date: 5/31/2017 9:07:00 PM
Lovely poem, Eve! Janice
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Date: 5/30/2017 5:01:00 AM
Lovely nature poem for the contest, Eve:) the last line is beautiful:)
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Date: 5/29/2017 5:12:00 PM
You did a great job with the words, Eve. I have no idea how the judge of this one will determine winners with so many wonderful poems written. I especially loved your second stanza here, nature dining! Thanks for the inspiration of your dragon contest.
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Date: 5/28/2017 11:35:00 PM
Splendid ... The second stanza I read several times ... Very nice write ... Good luck, Eve ...
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Date: 5/28/2017 11:14:00 PM
Nice work Eve :) Good luck, in the contest!!
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Date: 5/28/2017 1:43:00 PM
- A beautiful poem, Eve - Luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 5/26/2017 3:23:00 PM
A very lovely take on the mountain top lake theme, Eve. The second stanza is especially beautiful. // I too was unable to rate it!! Regards // paul
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Date: 5/26/2017 11:05:00 AM
The visuals are very relaxing. Nice work. I'm not allowed to rate it. Is that because you're in a contest?
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Date: 5/26/2017 8:31:00 AM
What a beautiful looking place. Lovely description.
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Date: 5/26/2017 7:27:00 AM
Sweet poem, Eve!
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Date: 5/26/2017 7:26:00 AM
A beautiful poetic creation for the contest. This should do well Eve.
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