Mountains

Early morning first light, sneaking through 
a wandering gaze out onto a sea of fog. 
A cool and glorious mountain tree top view
away from the city traffic and smog.

Beneath the breeze's hands, nature is dining,
sipping the morning sunshine wine,
rambling through the lush green, alluring 
woodlands. Clutching moss shrouds the pine 
softening the sounds of nature.

Life savoring and nurturing the crystal clear blue water that flow
through rocks to appease the colorful fish. That feature
the thought of enchantment where your heart does go.

5/25/2017
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Walker Avatar
August 18, 2017 at 1:27 PM
Eve, such a lovely and refreshing poem to read. Congratulations on your placement. ~ Sonia
Marcum Wong Avatar
August 17, 2017 at 4:59 AM
I was transported by your words Eve! Congratulations on your lovely poem's placement. : )
Barden Avatar
August 16, 2017 at 8:55 PM
Gorgeous write, Eve, so enchanting and whimsical ... I enjoyed this very much! Blessings and congrats! :-)
Sands Avatar
August 16, 2017 at 7:46 AM
Congratulations Eve :)
Michaels Avatar
June 13, 2017 at 2:27 AM
Lovely imagery, Eve - you did a great job of encapsulating the scene. Congratulations on your win. Regards, John.
Roper Avatar
June 14, 2017 at 7:43 PM
Thank you, John ~*
Canerdy Avatar
May 31, 2017 at 9:07 PM
Lovely poem, Eve! Janice
Daniel Avatar
May 30, 2017 at 5:01 AM
Lovely nature poem for the contest, Eve:) the last line is beautiful:)
Dietrich Avatar
May 29, 2017 at 5:12 PM
You did a great job with the words, Eve. I have no idea how the judge of this one will determine winners with so many wonderful poems written. I especially loved your second stanza here, nature dining! Thanks for the inspiration of your dragon contest.
Gupta Avatar
May 28, 2017 at 11:35 PM
Splendid ... The second stanza I read several times ... Very nice write ... Good luck, Eve ...
Smith Avatar
May 28, 2017 at 11:14 PM
Nice work Eve :) Good luck, in the contest!!
Andresen Avatar
May 28, 2017 at 1:43 PM
- A beautiful poem, Eve - Luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Callus Avatar
May 26, 2017 at 3:23 PM
A very lovely take on the mountain top lake theme, Eve. The second stanza is especially beautiful. // I too was unable to rate it!! Regards // paul
Cozart Avatar
May 26, 2017 at 11:05 AM
The visuals are very relaxing. Nice work. I'm not allowed to rate it. Is that because you're in a contest?
Thirtyseven Avatar
May 26, 2017 at 8:31 AM
What a beautiful looking place. Lovely description.
Goff Avatar
May 26, 2017 at 7:27 AM
Sweet poem, Eve!
Green Avatar
May 26, 2017 at 7:26 AM
A beautiful poetic creation for the contest. This should do well Eve.
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