Mountainous Tears

Water pool rippled as mountainous tears poured;
cascading rapids spray fallen boulder with foam.
Cleansing impurities that winter and spring stored;
refreshing mother’s evergreen menagerie home.

Cascading rapids spray fallen boulder with foam;
singing its babble, echoing against high rocky cliff.
Refreshing mother’s evergreen menagerie home,
with earthy rustic aroma in each new whiff.

Singing its babble, echoing against high rocky cliff;
surging under ferns of extended spindly blade.
With earthy rustic aroma in each new whiff;
presenting its wild fragrant outdoor glade.

Surging under ferns of extended spindly blade;
clear waters flow swift, sparkle in the sunlight ray. 
Presenting its wild fragrant outdoor glade;
abundant in growth and a pure wildlife buffet.

Clear waters flow swift, sparkle in the sunlight ray;
cleansing impurities that winter and spring stored.
Abundant in growth and a pure wildlife buffet;
water pool rippled as mountainous tears poured.

Copyright © 2011 By Caryl S. Muzzey
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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June 4, 2011 at 2:49 PM
Very well DONE it would be good for the Stream contest if you can use this form? I'm not sure! Thanks for your kind comments. Light & Love
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