Mountain Top

River, mountain top
You swim, I'll climb the summit
Closer to heaven
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Ruwindi Avatar
November 1, 2023 at 7:16 AM
Lovely haiku, and the way in which you interpret the journey of a river and yourself over is just genius!
Henry Avatar
November 1, 2023 at 4:00 PM
Thank you so much, Kaveesha!
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