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Mountain Suicide

Molten lava seeps, From severed volcanic veins: The earth bleeds magma.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 3/3/2010 2:37:00 AM
You are the Haiku master! (soup mail)
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Date: 3/1/2010 4:33:00 PM
Very expressive and descriptive Haiku that you have penned in this one. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
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Date: 2/28/2010 11:55:00 PM
Very nice. Love the last line. andrea
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Date: 2/28/2010 2:55:00 PM
U write like an artist paints ..with great intensity.. every word is so poignant and meaningful and important to the poem.. vivid and interesting too..luv.. Linda-Marie
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Date: 2/28/2010 2:43:00 AM
Easy reading so very enjoyable.
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Date: 2/27/2010 12:51:00 PM
Bravo. Amazing description Déirdre
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Date: 2/27/2010 3:50:00 AM
soup rep.
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Date: 2/27/2010 3:49:00 AM
soup rep.
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Date: 2/27/2010 3:29:00 AM
This is suicidal..that lava,those boiling veins..gave me the feeling to go to Sicily soon, and visit the 'Etna'..good Raul.Charma
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