Mountain Suicide

Molten lava seeps,

From severed volcanic veins:

The earth bleeds magma.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Smith-Johnsen Avatar
March 3, 2010 at 2:37 AM
You are the Haiku master! (soup mail)
Kendrick Avatar
March 1, 2010 at 4:33 PM
Very expressive and descriptive Haiku that you have penned in this one. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
Dietrich Avatar
February 28, 2010 at 11:55 PM
Very nice. Love the last line. andrea
Sweetheart Avatar
February 28, 2010 at 2:55 PM
U write like an artist paints ..with great intensity.. every word is so poignant and meaningful and important to the poem.. vivid and interesting too..luv.. Linda-Marie
James Avatar
February 28, 2010 at 2:43 AM
Easy reading so very enjoyable.
Omaidin Avatar
February 27, 2010 at 12:51 PM
Bravo. Amazing description Déirdre
Chircop Avatar
February 27, 2010 at 3:50 AM
soup rep.
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February 27, 2010 at 3:49 AM
soup rep.
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February 27, 2010 at 3:29 AM
This is suicidal..that lava,those boiling veins..gave me the feeling to go to Sicily soon, and visit the 'Etna'..good Raul.Charma
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