Michael Jordan Poet Tetractys

Mountain Prayers { Triple Tetractys }

The
Mountains
Bring me so
Much peace inside
I love to go there to talk to my Lord
I know a place that is so beautiful
Giant Redwoods
Majestic
Touch the
Sky
The
Silence
Broken by
A waterfall
Crystal clear reflections from up above

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Derrick Burton August 2, 2008 at 7:54 PM wow,thats real good I am inspired by this poem got to make it a favorite.

James Foulk July 28, 2008 at 8:49 AM Michael this was a very peaceful piece of poetry that read very well. and thank you for reading my silent voices and for your comment

Sharon Winter July 24, 2008 at 4:54 PM Wow I would so love to be there. You are so blessed to live near such amazing beauty. The miracles of nature bring us so much closer to our spiritual self. Wonderful poetry form too. Awesome write! Love, Shar

Robyn Blauw July 24, 2008 at 1:52 PM I can almost feel Giant Redwoods, and the peace and tranquility found there in your words.....you are a powerful writer Michael. As always,,,,sending you a hug..

July 24, 2008 at 1:24 PM Wonderful use of this challenging format. This poem has such a peaceful feel to it, fitting for the message. I see you are the top community builder today, a testament to your generous soul. Blessings to you. Keep on writing. Karen

P Sheart July 24, 2008 at 12:15 PM Just beautiful Michael. When nature's spiritual embrace become's one with love there is where the heart resides. Love Light Truth Patricia

Angela Crabtree July 24, 2008 at 12:00 PM No wonder. You are spiritual, which says it all. I love the imagery in this Tetractys. I like the flow of it, so I am going to make that form my next challenge. Peace, Ivy

Michael Degenhardt July 24, 2008 at 11:39 AM Such a lovely form as this reads with a natural effortless flow to it. The uplifting message is successfully provided through use of superb imagery. Wonderful! Michael