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Mountain of Regrets

As large boulders weep,
Tears stream down sharp cheeks of stone:
Sobbing precipice.

Copyright © Raul Moreno | Year Posted 2009

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May 12, 2015 at 1:25 PM

RAUL, LOVE THE NATURE HAIKU..SKAT

October 8, 2009 at 11:25 AM

Good words friend.....I like this one a lot.....:JP]

October 8, 2009 at 2:58 AM

Nicely done, Raul. It is weeping because it knows it is the end. Keep writing. Sara

October 7, 2009 at 7:01 PM

this is one of my favorite haikus. a clever piece indeed!!!!!

October 7, 2009 at 5:51 PM

I somehow missed this one today but found it tonight. I really love all your work. Thanks for everything. Marty

October 7, 2009 at 1:57 PM

Scaling Haiku Raul >> James

Savannah Rose Harper

October 7, 2009 at 12:46 PM

TIGHT! Very cool man and I love it that you're doin a conest for that picture......

Carol Sunshine Brown

October 7, 2009 at 10:00 AM

Thank you Raul for being here and sharing your poetry with us. Love, Carol

October 7, 2009 at 8:40 AM

This is a great haiku nice personification

Carrie Richards

October 7, 2009 at 8:11 AM

A emotional piece of nature and all the thoughts it brings to one's heart. Nice one! ~ Carrie

October 7, 2009 at 5:08 AM

a vivid picture you have created, wonderfully done :)

October 7, 2009 at 1:49 AM

a great applause given for this outrageously well done haiku!

October 6, 2009 at 11:38 PM

A waterfall of words Raul.Rgds Brian & thank you for your welcome blog comments today

Charmaine Chircop

October 6, 2009 at 10:25 PM

i can picture the scene,tears streaming down the rocky mountains on cold sharp cheeks,in regrets and sobs-this Haiku another gem,another favs.you've got us mused today..i can nearly feel a sad senryu in this Haiku of regrets..excellent work Raul--Charma

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