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Mountain of Regrets

As large boulders weep, Tears stream down sharp cheeks of stone: Sobbing precipice.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 5/12/2015 1:25:00 PM
RAUL, LOVE THE NATURE HAIKU..SKAT
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Date: 10/8/2009 11:25:00 AM
Good words friend.....I like this one a lot.....:JP]
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Date: 10/8/2009 2:58:00 AM
Nicely done, Raul. It is weeping because it knows it is the end. Keep writing. Sara
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Date: 10/7/2009 7:01:00 PM
this is one of my favorite haikus. a clever piece indeed!!!!!
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Date: 10/7/2009 5:51:00 PM
I somehow missed this one today but found it tonight. I really love all your work. Thanks for everything. Marty
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Date: 10/7/2009 1:57:00 PM
Scaling Haiku Raul >> James
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Date: 10/7/2009 12:46:00 PM
TIGHT! Very cool man and I love it that you're doin a conest for that picture......
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Date: 10/7/2009 10:00:00 AM
Thank you Raul for being here and sharing your poetry with us. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/7/2009 8:40:00 AM
This is a great haiku nice personification
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Date: 10/7/2009 8:11:00 AM
A emotional piece of nature and all the thoughts it brings to one's heart. Nice one! ~ Carrie
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Date: 10/7/2009 5:08:00 AM
a vivid picture you have created, wonderfully done :)
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Date: 10/7/2009 1:49:00 AM
a great applause given for this outrageously well done haiku!
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Date: 10/6/2009 11:38:00 PM
A waterfall of words Raul.Rgds Brian & thank you for your welcome blog comments today
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Date: 10/6/2009 10:25:00 PM
i can picture the scene,tears streaming down the rocky mountains on cold sharp cheeks,in regrets and sobs-this Haiku another gem,another favs.you've got us mused today..i can nearly feel a sad senryu in this Haiku of regrets..excellent work Raul--Charma
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