Mountain Haze

Haze on mountain green upon hill
Penetrating filling
Just seconds spirit renewal
Close my eyes scene seeing
Internal peace mist chaotic dream
Glory in minute way
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Beesley Avatar
August 4, 2010 at 1:48 PM
good,but all my memeories of mountains were fun but should be called,"gruesome tales of backwoods country terror"
Neels Avatar
August 1, 2010 at 8:59 AM
This is such a beautiful write Sara, enjoyed Wilma
Knop Avatar
August 1, 2010 at 4:29 AM
Pretty nicely written, Sara! Truely enjoyed the read!And thank you for commenting "Night Desire"!!! Have a great Sunday and week ahead!...Gert
Sweetheart Avatar
July 31, 2010 at 9:00 PM
So pretty Sara... luv your title... and the haze is so permeating in your lines of imagery.. a great read before bed..vivid picture...with luv.. happy Sunday.
Mehta Avatar
July 31, 2010 at 6:07 PM
A nice display of positive inner feelings, Sara
Jones Avatar
July 31, 2010 at 5:46 PM
You should all great poets need to be heard and recognized. Enter you never know! GOD BLESS
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