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Mountain Haze

Haze on mountain green upon hill Penetrating filling Just seconds spirit renewal Close my eyes scene seeing Internal peace mist chaotic dream Glory in minute way

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Anthony Beesley

Date: 8/4/2010 1:48:00 PM

good,but all my memeories of mountains were fun but should be called,"gruesome tales of backwoods country terror"

Wilma Neels

Date: 8/1/2010 8:59:00 AM

This is such a beautiful write Sara, enjoyed Wilma

Gert W. Knop

Date: 8/1/2010 4:29:00 AM

Pretty nicely written, Sara! Truely enjoyed the read!And thank you for commenting "Night Desire"!!! Have a great Sunday and week ahead!...Gert

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 7/31/2010 9:00:00 PM

So pretty Sara... luv your title... and the haze is so permeating in your lines of imagery.. a great read before bed..vivid picture...with luv.. happy Sunday.

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 7/31/2010 6:07:00 PM

A nice display of positive inner feelings, Sara

Lisa Jones

Date: 7/31/2010 5:46:00 PM

You should all great poets need to be heard and recognized. Enter you never know! GOD BLESS