Mountain Fog

Down a mountain, from the highest point it flows Cloudy white it comes into view, blocking sight The fog delights in its grandness, where it shows Power of the ground cloud, coming during night The humidity is high bringing moisture Having droplets of water in the mixture It flows down the mountain to valley below Leaving its trail of water on the ground low
Russell Sivey
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Bickerstaffe Avatar
March 6, 2013 at 8:14 PM
Well done with this RISPETTO Russ! Excellent flow, rhyming and imagery. Best wishes, Keith
Jones Avatar
March 6, 2013 at 7:18 PM
I could almost feel the cool mist..beautiful
Trifiatis Avatar
March 6, 2013 at 11:29 AM
What an extraordinary picture of nature's phenomenon! Wonderful writing! Thank you!
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